A Poem by PoemsbyPatrick

Forever is a word that has very deep meaning to me. I believe in it again.

My mind is the home to all thoughts of you
Within these limitless spaces there are no borders
No restrictions, no deadlines or walls
Only the fullness of our love in infinite potential

Love, passion, lust, consummate friendship
All of this and more embrace our souls together
I caress and consume your body, mind, spirit and soul
As do you feast on the fullness of me, in the tenderness of love

I long to consume all that you are
To share all that I am
Though the world may limit our space and time
In our minds, 
In our hearts,
In each other's arms,
There is only us ... forever

© 2013 PoemsbyPatrick

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I always believe in forever too, unless some makes it impossible... I never ever say goodbye's , as I hate them, rather a "see ya" or " be good"

You have such a wondrful connection with that person you write for.
Amazing lines, each and every one.


Posted 8 Years Ago

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Really captivating poem. Enjoyed reading it! :)

Posted 8 Years Ago

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The first stanza is SO beautiful; it almost seemed too beautiful to go with the others. It stood out, I read it twice. I loved the first stanza A LOT. It was a lovely poem overall.

Posted 8 Years Ago

True love IS forever

Posted 8 Years Ago

to be totally consumed with the thought of eternal love is a beautiful place to be.another wonderful write, my friend!

Posted 8 Years Ago

That was a great read. I loved the way that you believe in Forever, it's nearly impossible to believe in that now. Keep up the great work my friend.

Posted 8 Years Ago

A beautiful poem of love. I like the strong desire of love and the very nice ending. Thank you for the excellent poem.

Posted 8 Years Ago

The glass is half full! A moment of perfect love can last forever, regardless of the future or past. Good write!

Posted 8 Years Ago

nice work, your a really good poet!!!

Posted 8 Years Ago

To believe in Forever is indeed a powerful belief... one that grows full on love and friendship.

Tenderly penned.

Posted 8 Years Ago

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Added on November 3, 2012
Last Updated on January 27, 2013
Tags: Poetry, love, forever




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