The Dream of Our Love

There are times,
In the stillness of the morning,
When my arms are empty,
That you seem like a memory.
A dream,
Far too beautiful to be real,
Far too wonderful to be mine,
To far off to be attained.
In these times,
I realize my weaknesses,
I am assaulted by my faults,
I am brought low and made to be humble.
I hunger,
For the comfort of your touch,
For the sweetness of your kiss,
For fullness of your embrace.
I hope,
To realize the wonder that is you,
To be worthy of the love you give,
To return in some small measure,
The fullness of the same.
Without you I am lost,
Together we sustain,
To grow into the future,
And realize the dream of our love.

Reviews

[Adam Whitworth]

I'd like a few more substantial details in this, but well done ;)

[Sami Khalil]

"Without you I am lost,
Together we sustain,
To grow into the future,
And realize the dream of our love."

Some don't appreciate love but I do appreciate this beautiful poem...Thank you for sharing...:)

["writing by" KS]

So many people don't appreciate love or experience true love.. but this piece holds both.. just lovely.. thank you

[Muse]

Not everything needs to be a dream. The author can make it as real as it seems.

[Coyote Poetry]

Good to appreciate love and understand love take time and kindness. I like the positive thoughts in the poem. I like the strong ending to the excellent poem.
Coyote

[Emberlorna]

Quite epic and most romantic, so much love expressed.. Amazing, stunning and haunting is this absolute jewel of love poetry.

[Tarry Franck]

So beautiful...lovely work. Romance ~~ Gotta love it :)

[Rebecca Leigh]

Wow, this is beautiful, and so to the point. it was also very concise. Well done

[quinfinn]

this is utter and unadulterated , passion and romance at its best. nicely worded and beautifully written.

[s y e]

Lovely job. Flowed really well and great description.