I've named my poison

I've named my poison

A Poem by Ryan "rat" Travis
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Written for a contest on alcoholic beverages, I think I won, not sure.

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Oh you evil temptress

lick slam suck

Once I dance with you

I can never stop

A quick shot

                   I love the burn

and another

           another

                 another

                       an

                          oth

                               er

the salt

     the lime

 oh what poison you are

                       the

              spins

                       that

              you

                     give

              me

     twirling

               twirling

        I

 love   

          to

dance

               with

                        you

 

tequila

                                you kill me

 

© 2008 Ryan "rat" Travis


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Oh, yeah...set me up and I'll knock'em back...This is a cute one..I like the way you formated it.

Posted 16 Years Ago


Absolutely bloody fantastic!

Posted 17 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

that slimey lime, and the worm that tickles your senses woo hooo. Guess what this is good, but your other post was phenomenal, ohhh yeah kick a*s band ya got going there, checked em out the other day.....

Posted 17 Years Ago


2 of 2 people found this review constructive.


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Added on February 6, 2008
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Ryan "rat" Travis
Ryan "rat" Travis

Salem, MA



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Ryan is an accomplished poet, in 14 years hes performed all over New England, as well as New York, New Jersey, Pennsylvania and Kentucky. Published in many magazines and online publications, Ryan's po.. more..

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