Autumn Sensations

It's a caramel latte afternoon

Drenched in gray clouds

And chilly sky drop dew

Mocha meditation simmers

Peculating the crisp pear air

As the pumpkin morning

Slowly falls into the distance

Melodies of the spiked apple cider evening

Dance upon the violet the tides

As romantic rose petals

Spring forth sparking fiery life

Autumn sensations spiral

Caressing the relaxed mind

Desirous notations 

Combust when they ignite 

 

Reviews

[AK]

Wow! Your writing is terrific:) I haven't said this in quite a while, but there is something about the way you write that makes me want to spew a hundred praises out and shower them at your feet. I really like the way you used beverages to describe the beautiful feeling of the autumn season:))
Keep writing!
*100*

[Poetic Beauty]

Thank you. I like to write in a bit of an abstract way that adds all the senses in so that the reader can dance among the feeling and the setting of the piece. I write about many different things. We all have our own unique voice. Let yours shine.

[AK]

:)

[Arun.J]

ah! wonderful.. brilliant imagery... :)

[Poetic Beauty]

I am glad you enjoyed the imagery.

[Lily Mae]

This is my favorite time of the year, the scent, the color, the touch of it all. You've spiced up my night with this one :) xo

[Poetic Beauty]

I am glad you enjoyed reading this piece

[Sirius King]

A Great Write!
Perfect for this time of the year :-)

[Poetic Beauty]

Thank you.

[Sirius King]

ur welcome :-)

[The Rock And Roll Cowbo..]

caramel latte afternoon, love that description... you have got me revved and ready for fall with your beautiful poem.

[Poetic Beauty]

Ahh love in the fall can be a stunning thing...chats over coffee and bonfire nights. Hot coco and hayrack rides oh and lets not forget sharing a piece of apple pie or pumpkin.

[The Rock And Roll Cowboy(REBEL WITH A CAUSE)]

It is my favorite season... the colors, the smells, the crisp air.

[Poetic Beauty]

Mine is spring and summer but fall does have a nice flare as well but you can keep the damn winter with its snow

[Antonio Valentino]

aww this was really great.. and gosh it made me hungry too haha

i could smell all the wonderful things you were talking about and it really made me think of fall which is now upon us.. its such a wonderful month for reflection isnt it..

wonderful writing here, nicely done

:)

[Poetic Beauty]

Thank you. The autumn season is in full swing here today. Gray clouds with chilly rain as it is only 52 degrees. The idea of love mixed with the spicier autumn sensations creep into my mind and I rolled with it.

[Antonio Valentino]

youre in illinois yes.. waww it was over a 100 degrees here in cali this last week.. cooling down to a cool 90 ish today though haha.. glad you rolled with it, it came out great.. :)

[Poetic Beauty]

Yes I am in Illinois. Our weather changes dramatically all the time. No matter the season lol

[Antonio Valentino]

well stay warm :)

[Poetic Beauty]

I am making stuffed chicken breast in the oven so the house is warm. Had to turn the heat on for half an hour to get the chill out of the house earlier. It was only 40 deg this morning.

[Antonio Valentino]

holy moley..

mmmm stuffed chicken breast yumm.. what are you filling them with..
read moreholy moley..

mmmm stuffed chicken breast yumm.. what are you filling them with..

[Poetic Beauty]

wild rice and stuffing.

[Poetic Beauty]

lets not forget the cheesy bacon potatoes and green beans

[Antonio Valentino]

oh yess lets not, lets not.. sounds yummyliscious.. :)

ok now ive got to go forage for some vittles haah

[Poetic Beauty]

okay lol

[*~*Butterfly Kisses*~*]

This poem made me love fall even more. Nice word play. Awesome write!

[Poetic Beauty]

Thank you. The idea popped into my mind and I just went with it.