Sliding Stars

Sliding Stars

A Poem by Poetic Beauty

Quiet your mind
Soar threw the nebula
Slide free of reality

Dance in the moment
Of two beings connected
Their universal strings
Twist, becoming interlaced 

Sliding around the stars
On this cosmic ride
Surfing on ethereal tides

Hold your hand in mine
As we melt into one
Creating a unique world
Private, only for us 

© 2013 Poetic Beauty


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Ah, the topic of space. Such a good choice and what I imagined here within just your first stanza was the simple image of two people holding hands and waltzing along the top of a planet. Having the stars be with only source of light. Surrounded by quiet and allowing the people to think of and create their own sound of music to take a step to. Truly beautiful...I love your talent :)

Posted 6 Years Ago


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Poetic Beauty

6 Years Ago

That was pretty much the idea and images that ran through my mind when I wrote this pieces.



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Cosmic love, beautifully penned, PB.

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Poetic Beauty

6 Years Ago

I love to write a bit abstract and about cosmic love. Thank you.
I actually love the description here. The last stanza was an amazing end to it. Great job.

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Poetic Beauty

6 Years Ago

Sometimes we meet amazing people in our dreams.
Ah, the topic of space. Such a good choice and what I imagined here within just your first stanza was the simple image of two people holding hands and waltzing along the top of a planet. Having the stars be with only source of light. Surrounded by quiet and allowing the people to think of and create their own sound of music to take a step to. Truly beautiful...I love your talent :)

Posted 6 Years Ago


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Poetic Beauty

6 Years Ago

That was pretty much the idea and images that ran through my mind when I wrote this pieces.
Loved this one! You have captured that perfect moment when two lovers become one and the universe explodes around them. Very well done!

Posted 6 Years Ago


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Poetic Beauty

6 Years Ago

Ahh those moments that make you sigh. I am glad you saw that in this piece. It really is about cre.. read more
the feeling of love is swirling & creating a passionate heat between the lovers. awesome

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Poetic Beauty

6 Years Ago

Thank you. I am glad you could feel the swirling of love.
Universal love, orbiting in each other's arms. very cool my friend.

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Poetic Beauty

6 Years Ago

Thank you. I love to write about love drifting in space. Gives it that feel of floating.
This sounds like a good dose of meditation and fantasy rolled into one. There's also a romantic edge to it that gives it character. A nice write.

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Poetic Beauty

6 Years Ago

Thank you. The fantasy and meditation feel is what I was hoping entwined with love.
Hmm...wondrful depiction of love in cosmos. Must say, your poems are short and revealing :-)

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Poetic Beauty

6 Years Ago

Not all my poems are short. It all depends on what comes to mind. I am glad you like the descripti.. read more
cosmic love...I don't care for the text you chose (it's hard to read) but the imagery is nice.

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Poetic Beauty

6 Years Ago

I am glad you like the words I painted in this piece.

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