Earth's Song

Earth's Song

A Poem by Poetic Beauty
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Tribute to Larry Dyson I picture him saying these words.

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Listen

Listen

To the beat

Beat of the drum

Earth

Mother Earth

Sing her song

 

Feel

Feel

The vibrations

Beneath your feet

Pulsing

Humming

Telling her story

 

Look

Look

Beyond your door

A world awaits

Shining

Shimmering

With visual appeal

 

Savor

Savor

Delectable fruits

Salivate for more

Nature

Nature produces

Forever more

 

Aroma

Aroma

Oh so divine

Sooth the senses

Loam

Fertile loam’s

Scent under your feet

 

Dance

Dance

Rejoice each day

Respect each creature

Of land

And sea


© 2014 Poetic Beauty


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It reads to me like a whisper, making the audience pay more attention to what is being said and joining the connection that the speaker feels.
I know it wasn't spoken word, but it was in my head as i read it, to the sound of a gentle breeze or waves lapping onto a beach.
Would definitely suit that, despite my spoken voice sounding like i gargle gravel each morning 😀

Posted 1 Year Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Lorry

1 Year Ago

The beat could be a pulse/ heartbeat. You should give it a try, i can already hear it.
Poetic Beauty

1 Year Ago

Oh no I have a horrible speaking voice. Lol spoken word is not my thing
Lorry

1 Year Ago

I hear ya. Well, actually, i don't 😀



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It reads to me like a whisper, making the audience pay more attention to what is being said and joining the connection that the speaker feels.
I know it wasn't spoken word, but it was in my head as i read it, to the sound of a gentle breeze or waves lapping onto a beach.
Would definitely suit that, despite my spoken voice sounding like i gargle gravel each morning 😀

Posted 1 Year Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Lorry

1 Year Ago

The beat could be a pulse/ heartbeat. You should give it a try, i can already hear it.
Poetic Beauty

1 Year Ago

Oh no I have a horrible speaking voice. Lol spoken word is not my thing
Lorry

1 Year Ago

I hear ya. Well, actually, i don't 😀
Wow very good, very describe well used image its very nice

Posted 7 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

The rhythm is so beautifully profound... lending itself so well to the senses all coming alive in your words. What a wonderful tribute!

Posted 7 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Poetic Beauty

7 Years Ago

I have loved this piece since I wrote. I'm glad you liked the theme.
i love the feel of the poem. i like how the poem tells us to listen to mother earth sing which in my opinion is listening to things around us in nature.i love how you include what the earth gives us such as the fruits we eat. and that we should honor mother earth by rejoicing each day for the gifts she bestows upon us.

Posted 7 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Poetic Beauty

7 Years Ago

Thank you. I think nature is beautiful and if we aren't careful we are going to ruin this planet wi.. read more
Very uplifting piece liked the imagery in.this alot.. nice.job.

Posted 7 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Poetic Beauty

7 Years Ago

Thank you Sean. I am glad you liked the imagery.
Love how graceful and raw and amazing the vibe of the poem is. It's mildly tribal, but in a very tame way, if that makes sense. :D I loved the repetition. Well done. Xx.

Posted 7 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Poetic Beauty

7 Years Ago

It does make sense and I am glad you liked the repetition I chose for this piece.
wow this is another great poem, i love how u describe stuff, i also love the words you use, I love the image you have chosen to use, great use of colours and well placed

Posted 7 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Poetic Beauty

7 Years Ago

I like using colors in my pieces. I believe colors help set the ton and emotions for writing.
I loved the beat of this poem! A feel good reading poem! Excellent!

Posted 7 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Poetic Beauty

7 Years Ago

This is a feel good reading poem. Thank you kindly.
Beautifully written! And paints a soothing picture!

Posted 7 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Poetic Beauty

7 Years Ago

I am glad this piece was soothing to you. I love Nature but I also wrote tribute to Larry Dyson.
storiestotell

7 Years Ago

I really thought it was an excellent write!

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