October Lights

October Lights

A Poem by Poetic Beauty

October lights have faded
The colors dwindled
The season's beauty
Has blossomed and died
Drifting away

Fire lights have diminished
Upon the cold breeze
Embers have become cold
Ashes born to a season
That has come to pass

Winter's fingers claw
Slashing upon the wind
Bitter and biting
The earth
In its icy clutches

Transforming the land
Into a fridigid desert
Icicles growing
As blizzards encase
The world in white

© 2014 Poetic Beauty


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How wonderful. You wrote it beautifully.

Posted 5 Years Ago


The white world of winter for sure and seems we're still going to see more of it..vivid imagery within this piece..

Posted 6 Years Ago


0 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Poetic Beauty

6 Years Ago

Winter is not my favorite season. Longing to feel the warmth of the sun on my skin and watch the flo.. read more
  Fran Marie

6 Years Ago

Me too..enough of this cold weather already
Wonderful seasonal exhalation :) Cycles of such beauty, would we see the glow to all, lovely! xo

Posted 6 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Poetic Beauty

6 Years Ago

I love spring throughAutumn but winter not so much.
Ruth

6 Years Ago

I hear ya lol ♥
Beautiful description! I really like this: it captures the inner landscape and devastation of the changing seasons. The world feels so bald when the weather and the seasons change. Great work!

Posted 6 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Poetic Beauty

6 Years Ago

Winter is barren and cold.
There's great imagery and flow here, well done

Posted 6 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Poetic Beauty

6 Years Ago

I'm glad you liked the imagery.
The seasons are cycling around again....the earth is going to sleep later to be reborn again in the spring. Very strong and vivid imagery bringing to life the bleakness that winter can be.

Posted 6 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Poetic Beauty

6 Years Ago

Winter for me is a cold and barren time.
We do not have winter in our country but the words you shared made me see how it feels like to witness the transformation of seasons. I enjoyed reading this. :)

Posted 6 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Poetic Beauty

6 Years Ago

I'm glad you were a ble to visualize this piece.
The last of the poem gave me imagery of a land that was almost aging.
A nice tribute. I miss fall already.

Posted 6 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Poetic Beauty

6 Years Ago

Me too. I love all the season's except winter.
The descriptive nature of the piece leads us in and holds onto us, well done, good read.

Posted 6 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Poetic Beauty

6 Years Ago

Thank you. I'm glad you liked the descriptions in this piece. Winter,for me, is a cold and desolate .. read more
I like the transformation in your imagery to the last line in successions of anticipations. Bravo...........

Posted 6 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Poetic Beauty

6 Years Ago

I'm glad you liked the progression of the imagery in this piece.
Sami Khalil

6 Years Ago

Yep. You are welcome...:)....................

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