Just Breathe

Just Breathe

A Poem by Poetic Beauty

Just Breathe
And listen carefully
Between the lines
To the pauses
The respirations

Just breathe
Hear clearly
The rapid drum
That pulses quickly
Song of the heart

Just Breathe
Inhale the experience
The ardent scent
Of a time long past
But still remaining

Just Breathe
Exhale the negative
Release it to the world
Let it glide to the stars
Explode in the Milky Way.

© 2017 Poetic Beauty


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These moments can be lifesavers in alleviating outside influences, stresses and strains, that to me feels like turning your ears off from the noise that is ever present around us, that we don't even notice growing and gnawing away at us until the pressure builds and the cork pops.
Now that I have escaped city life, it is so much easier to just focus on your breath and fully see and feel everything around you.
I may save this for future returns to the city 😀

Posted 1 Month Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Poetic Beauty

1 Month Ago

Sometimes we just need to pause and let the chaos go. I’m glad you enjoyed this poem. You can borr.. read more
Lorry

1 Month Ago

Merci buckets 😀
Poetic Beauty

1 Month Ago

🙃 no problem



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I’ve started meditation and yoga recently and your poem sounds like good advice.

Posted 1 Month Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Poetic Beauty

1 Month Ago

Sometimes we just need to take Moment and take a breath
Katrina Mckeown

1 Month Ago

Very True 🙂🌈
Nice repetitive
poem and I understand
the repetition poem
it's a repeated line.

Nicely penned

Posted 1 Month Ago


These moments can be lifesavers in alleviating outside influences, stresses and strains, that to me feels like turning your ears off from the noise that is ever present around us, that we don't even notice growing and gnawing away at us until the pressure builds and the cork pops.
Now that I have escaped city life, it is so much easier to just focus on your breath and fully see and feel everything around you.
I may save this for future returns to the city 😀

Posted 1 Month Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Poetic Beauty

1 Month Ago

Sometimes we just need to pause and let the chaos go. I’m glad you enjoyed this poem. You can borr.. read more
Lorry

1 Month Ago

Merci buckets 😀
Poetic Beauty

1 Month Ago

🙃 no problem
I agree. I meditate daily to find sleep. Breathing is necessary for the meditation. I liked the old wisdom. If upset. Count to ten and take ten deep breathe. Time to gather words and mind. Thank you dear friend for sharing the amazing poetry.
Coyote

Posted 2 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Poetic Beauty

2 Years Ago

I have anxiety so I use breathing to keep me focused and relax my mind to calm myself
Coyote Poetry

2 Years Ago

We need to stop, breathe and re-gather our thoughts and mind.
Star Gazer did you see a moon out tonight or was the skies just to overcast and your great view did not last but by morning sun and the new day you had won The Good Lord looked down upon you and smiled upon you and said Oh Glorious days ahead.

Posted 2 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

this is very relaxing to read yet simple and beautifully written

I'm new on here, so it would be an honour if you could review my poems! (my most recent one is called "deep in it" would love to have your feedback on it.

Posted 2 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Poetic Beauty

2 Years Ago

Many times my poems are simple. It all depends on my mood.
I liked the peace of this poem, juxtaposed with undercurrents of passion and negativity. It's like life, where we often experience a number of concurrent emotions and thoughts, some of them at odds with one another. A very enjoyable read.

Posted 2 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Poetic Beauty

2 Years Ago

Thank you very much.
"Just Breathe
Inhale the experience
The ardent scent
Of a time long past
But still remaining"

I think the above stanza is my favorite. I love how you describe the scent as "ardent"; it sounds so exciting! so thrilling! And I adore the last two lines. It feels like something that is apart of you returns to the universe, to space, to where our basic parts originated.

Posted 2 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Poetic Beauty

2 Years Ago

Here is the inspiration for this piece and you pick up on the deeper meaning. I had the love of my l.. read more
E.V. Black

2 Years Ago

Across distances, a bond attaches you. It's a lovely poem for something you've experienced. :)
Poetic Beauty

2 Years Ago

I know he is my soulmate. We keep coming back to each other time and time again. We just aren't toge.. read more
Just lovely full of motivation~

Posted 2 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Poetic Beauty

2 Years Ago

Thank you kindly for reading and liking the poem
How many people ever notice that they are breathing. Yet it can reveal so much about our surroundings and emotions.

Posted 2 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Poetic Beauty

2 Years Ago

This is very true

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Poetic Beauty
Poetic Beauty

corn country, IL



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