Your Sanctuary

Your Sanctuary

A Poem by Poetic Beauty

Allow her to be
Your sanctuary
Where the walls
Stand strong
And true

Where a loving heart
Waits patiently
To envelop
With ardent notes

Allow her smile
To light up the night
Vanish darkness
Shattering doubt

Where shadows fade
Under an amber glow
Relaxing the days chaos
A beacon of hope

Allow her arms
To encompass you
Giving a sense of peace
When all seems lost

Where the world
Melts away
And reverie takes over
Incinerating confusion

© 2018 Poetic Beauty


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Beautiful and positive poetry shared dear poet.
"Allow her smile
To light up the night
Vanish darkness
Shattering doubt"
We need the light of love and kindness. I liked the complete poem and the above lines were my favorite. Thank you for sharing the amazing poetry.
Coyote

Posted 2 Days Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Poetic Beauty

2 Days Ago

All of us need a partner that is a place to feel safe and loved even when the outside world is a bat.. read more
Coyote Poetry

1 Day Ago

I agree my friend.



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That last stanza is great. the sanctuary of that kind of love is the place I want to be. :)

Posted 1 Day Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Poetic Beauty

1 Day Ago

Me too! Life takes many twist and turns along the way but hopefully one day.
Love truly is a great sanctuary from this harsh and unloving world. It makes things meaningful and encompassing. Your beautiful poem says it all.

Posted 1 Day Ago


0 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Poetic Beauty

1 Day Ago

This is how I believe real lol be is. Maybe that is me being romantic and all but what can I say...
Sami Khalil

1 Day Ago

Wow! You are welcome.
For me it's more like the night itself or the moon..that silence when the world is asleep and you are free to strum that guitar or play that song as loud as you want...a bath or a piano recital at three ayem. I like to think that if it were a person then i would hold those qualities for them but Leo and all..lol. Wonderful piece. Thanks for the read.

Posted 2 Days Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Poetic Beauty

2 Days Ago

That’s the beauty about poetry...perspective allows people to connect personally to the piece. Whi.. read more
Perdition

1 Day Ago

No..I'm pretty sure it's about the night or the moon...lol. Yep..I do love that about poetry as well.. read more
Poetic Beauty

1 Day Ago

We poets, artist and mAdhatter types seems to come alive and the ideas come alive at night
Very good read. Excellent!

Posted 2 Days Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Beautifully captured.
Whether you are with them, doing the most mundane of things, or absent through work or any other number of reasons, It is the person that fills your thoughts that makes getting through the day and returning to them, feel like an extra layer of internal warmth and that wry smile each time they cross your mind.
A difference of a house becoming home and knowing they are awaiting your return with the same smile and warmth.


Posted 2 Days Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Poetic Beauty

2 Days Ago

I’m glad you understood this piece love should be a partnership a safe place to fall on those days.. read more
Lorry

2 Days Ago

And we gotta make the most of it when it is.
Poetic Beauty

2 Days Ago

Enjoy it while we have it exactly
Beautiful and positive poetry shared dear poet.
"Allow her smile
To light up the night
Vanish darkness
Shattering doubt"
We need the light of love and kindness. I liked the complete poem and the above lines were my favorite. Thank you for sharing the amazing poetry.
Coyote

Posted 2 Days Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Poetic Beauty

2 Days Ago

All of us need a partner that is a place to feel safe and loved even when the outside world is a bat.. read more
Coyote Poetry

1 Day Ago

I agree my friend.
Simply reading this somehow creates a sense of peace in my mind. Bit by bit and piece by piece, your words somehow unburden the hearts and minds. Beautifully written!

Posted 1 Year Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Poetic Beauty

2 Days Ago

I’m glad you liked this poem. We all need love and comfort.
This poem explains why we "fall" in love. It makes you just want to let go and have no fear
of trusting another. It's beautiful how a touch could be everything. You've tapped into one
of the purest forms of caring. Romance is not dead.

Posted 1 Year Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

This is love. So gently and kindly crafted, with little bits of first love and lasting love. I adore this.

Posted 2 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Poetic Beauty

2 Years Ago

Thank you. I think people should be a sanctuary for each other
Each and every one of your stanzas is finely said.. but the one below means most to me: tis warm, caring, sharing, protecting: - 'Allow her arms ~ To encompass you ~ Giving a sense of peace ~ When all seems lost .. '

You have such a gentle heart and hands when you place poems in front of us - this is no exception.. tis beautiful. Thank you..

Posted 2 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Poetic Beauty

2 Years Ago

Thank you for your kind words nd words. At the end of the day when the world is harsh our loves shou.. read more
emmajoy

2 Years Ago

they should, of course.. that's what sharing is...

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Poetic Beauty

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