Rising Dream

Rising Dream

A Poem by Poetic Beauty
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Written 4-4-2021

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Slumber is on the horizon
Slowly floating in closer
Lingering with calm patience
As twilight creeps, fading to night

It’s finger massage softly
Relaxing the chaotic mind
Softly probing the brain to drift
Soaring on white moon lite clouds

Feathered onyx wings caress
Wrapping pleasantly with warmth
Guiding with cosmic intent
Stars become nature’s dim night light

Body relaxes with ease
Calming vibrations ripple down
Seeping within deeper layers
Eyes flutter close quietly

Dreams meander near the surface
Whispering hope within the dark
A balm to the aching soul
Longing, rises to the ether

© 2021 Poetic Beauty


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I love the images in this poem, sleepy tale of quiet, relaxation, drifting of the mind into a perfect space; perhaps in a cosmic world where light is dim; moon sleeps stars snooze; where breath is utmost; eyes close slowly and one drifts into slumber. I' getting sleepy!!!
Best, B

Posted 2 Weeks Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Poetic Beauty

2 Weeks Ago

I wrote this on an extremely calm night



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I think we have been dreaming for a long time now to escape what is going on in the world with pandemics, shootings, political unrest.
this calming poem is saying maybe soon we can literally go into that dream and make it a reality...
maybe where we live could be that dream.
j.

Posted 2 Months Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Poetic Beauty

2 Months Ago

I get too overwhelmed if I watch the news too much so usually in the morning and I tend to pay close.. read more
How wonderfully you portrayed the process of dream through sleep. It's magical, ethereal, very soothing to read! When twilight fades into night, then the calm relaxed mind eventually entered into an ethereal place called dreamland...... Where only hopes rule... How beautifully you described this entire process

Posted 2 Months Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Poetic Beauty

2 Months Ago

Thank you very much. Dreams are magical and transporting
I think it is the first time I read this really calm and smooth tune through your words, you took us with your journey in a very gentle way, again your last verse really amazing, specially the last two lines are deeply moving. Love sent to You 💕

Posted 2 Months Ago


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Poetic Beauty

2 Months Ago

I’m pretty good at keeping my anxiety under control but I have those moments lol
lightsong

2 Months Ago

Lol still it's SO good that You also can create through these anxious moments ☺️ bless You my de.. read more
Poetic Beauty

2 Months Ago

Thank you kindly

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Added on April 14, 2021
Last Updated on April 14, 2021
Tags: Dreams, comfort, slumber, night, peace

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Poetic Beauty
Poetic Beauty

corn country, IL



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First off I'm on here to post my writing to have an outlet for my emotions. You will find a variety of poems. If you like take a moment and stroll through this poets mind. Secondly be kind to each .. more..

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