Rising Dream

Written 4-4-2021

Slumber is on the horizon
Slowly floating in closer
Lingering with calm patience
As twilight creeps, fading to night

It’s finger massage softly
Relaxing the chaotic mind
Softly probing the brain to drift
Soaring on white moon lite clouds

Feathered onyx wings caress
Wrapping pleasantly with warmth
Guiding with cosmic intent
Stars become nature’s dim night light

Body relaxes with ease
Calming vibrations ripple down
Seeping within deeper layers
Eyes flutter close quietly

Dreams meander near the surface
Whispering hope within the dark
A balm to the aching soul
Longing, rises to the ether

Reviews

[Betty Hermelee]

I love the images in this poem, sleepy tale of quiet, relaxation, drifting of the mind into a perfect space; perhaps in a cosmic world where light is dim; moon sleeps stars snooze; where breath is utmost; eyes close slowly and one drifts into slumber. I' getting sleepy!!!
Best, B

[Poetic Beauty]

I wrote this on an extremely calm night

[jacob erin-cilberto]

I think we have been dreaming for a long time now to escape what is going on in the world with pandemics, shootings, political unrest.
this calming poem is saying maybe soon we can literally go into that dream and make it a reality...
maybe where we live could be that dream.
j.

[Poetic Beauty]

I get too overwhelmed if I watch the news too much so usually in the morning and I tend to pay closer attention to local news. I was so freaked out in the beginning with the covid 19 and I have to work with the public as an essential worker. I was afraid to go to work but I refused to let myself get paranoid and frozen again. I wash my hands and wear my mask and don’t let ppl get too close to me.

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How wonderfully you portrayed the process of dream through sleep. It's magical, ethereal, very soothing to read! When twilight fades into night, then the calm relaxed mind eventually entered into an ethereal place called dreamland...... Where only hopes rule... How beautifully you described this entire process

[Poetic Beauty]

Thank you very much. Dreams are magical and transporting

[lightsong]

I think it is the first time I read this really calm and smooth tune through your words, you took us with your journey in a very gentle way, again your last verse really amazing, specially the last two lines are deeply moving. Love sent to You 💕

[Poetic Beauty]

I have calm peaceful moment but I also have anxiety so when I find those peaceful moments throughout the day I fully embrace them whole heartedly

[lightsong]

yes You did, and You did embrace them so wonderfully in your poem here. may they keep prospering in your daily life✨🌼✨

[Poetic Beauty]

I’m pretty good at keeping my anxiety under control but I have those moments lol

[lightsong]

Lol still it's SO good that You also can create through these anxious moments ☺️ bless You my dear 🤍

[Poetic Beauty]

Thank you kindly