Answer to Why Me

Answer to Why Me

A Poem by Poetic Beauty
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An answer to why me asked ten years ago give or take a year relating to the poem I wrote Charming.

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The question still lingers within
Undulating within my mind
Puzzled, you once asked “why me?”
I will now reply with an answer
Seriously, why not it be you?”
Charming the keeper of her soul

For years the tongue was frozen
The phrase hovering, within time
Circling in the brain, processing
A solid answer not quite forming
Surprised at the mere idea
That you didn’t already know

It has dwelled submerged inside
Surfacing to be given a voice
Unconditional Love just is
An electric spark upon meeting
A connection of the two souls
The tender moments in the quiet

It never changes its rhythm
Strumming a unique melody
Contoured to your inner being
Continually drifting towards you
Swirling with these exotic notes
Merging with your own vibration

Contentment found unexpectedly
Calming the anxious chaotic mind
Your presence an instant sense of peace
A feeling of being complete
Allowing a soft breath of silence
To fill the overly noisy space

It’s a mesmerizing true smile
Causing the heart to stammer with need
Igniting an undefinable want
The magnetic energy of you
That gravitates across the divide
Making the room temperature rise

It’s the solid understanding
Of how to handle the situation
Knowing when to remain stoically calm
And when to stubbornly stand your ground
When to have a gentle demeanor
Also when to demand my compliance

Your energy simply calls to me
Sparking a ferocious primal fire
Fueling a desire blazing with heat
A raw predatory sense flaring
Commanding my complete attention
A warmth that sizzles to the bone

There is many diverse factors
That create the answer you seek
Mostly it’s who you are as a whole
The way you respond to who I am
Accepting me without judgement
The soaring fire and the calm rain

© 2021 Poetic Beauty


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I believe, we must be friends first before we can be lovers.
"There is many diverse factors
That create the answer you seek
Mostly it’s who you are as a whole
The way you respond to who I am
Accepting me without judgement
The soaring fire and the calm rain"
I liked the above lines and we must know someone before we commit to them. All of us have strength and weaknesses. We must like both to know love. Hello dear poet from Michigan and thank you for sharing the amazing poetry.
Coyote

Posted 3 Weeks Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Poetic Beauty

3 Weeks Ago

This one came into my life as a complete surprise and 14 years later even though we aren’t togethe.. read more
Coyote Poetry

3 Weeks Ago

I wish we had Facebook and the cell phones. Many lovers and good friends. I lost contact with. It is.. read more
Poetic Beauty

3 Weeks Ago

This one and I keep circling around. We stopped talking when I broke up with him for about a year ha.. read more



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I believe, we must be friends first before we can be lovers.
"There is many diverse factors
That create the answer you seek
Mostly it’s who you are as a whole
The way you respond to who I am
Accepting me without judgement
The soaring fire and the calm rain"
I liked the above lines and we must know someone before we commit to them. All of us have strength and weaknesses. We must like both to know love. Hello dear poet from Michigan and thank you for sharing the amazing poetry.
Coyote

Posted 3 Weeks Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Poetic Beauty

3 Weeks Ago

This one came into my life as a complete surprise and 14 years later even though we aren’t togethe.. read more
Coyote Poetry

3 Weeks Ago

I wish we had Facebook and the cell phones. Many lovers and good friends. I lost contact with. It is.. read more
Poetic Beauty

3 Weeks Ago

This one and I keep circling around. We stopped talking when I broke up with him for about a year ha.. read more
A perfect unconditional love is depicted in this piece and you are awesome in it! Yes, it soothes, it gives a sense of security among all kind of chaos, it is benevolent and above all it is that kind of love which is unuttered still there! It's a spark and a rhythm that coincides with own heart beat..... I love this write

Posted 3 Weeks Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Poetic Beauty

3 Weeks Ago

Thank you so much for your kind word. It is anl Be that is eternal
I just say as a completely off set or neutral 3rd party to be cautious. I felt that way for a while for someone. I was totally in love with who i thought she was, or who I wanted her to be......not with who she really was. I was heartbroken for years. But I'm thrilled to say that I completely moved on and am happy I did. It was very hard though.



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1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Poetic Beauty

3 Weeks Ago

No it’s okay I get the warning. And many people do need this warning but in my case I have actuall.. read more
Frankie

3 Weeks Ago

I can't find it.
Poetic Beauty

3 Weeks Ago

Never mind this is the follow up poem the one that started the question is charming
Ten. years later you formulate the perfect response. I wonder if and where ...then again perhaps in the next room. Some questions don't really have a true answer but they burrow, all the same, stabbing away with a strang reflection until a decade later viola...a poem lights the perfect ball and answer. Still, I wonder...next room or on that helicopter that just rose ten feet on the surface of Mars? Well, like the great and powerful Jewel once sang, " Sometimes it be that way".

"A connection of the two souls
The tender moments in the quiet"...be there nothing so well unrehearsed as such a connection I know not the animal. Liked it...thanks~

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Poetic Beauty

3 Weeks Ago

We dated way back in 2007 flash forward we reconnected in 2009 we
Stayed connected for severa.. read more
I reallyl liked this poem about the pure love one has.

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Poetic Beauty

3 Weeks Ago

I’m glad you liked this poem about unconditional love
To me, there seems to be a struggle within your own mind about what a relationship should be and you show us that in the first couple of stanzas; for years you felt that his love was frozen, not warm and bonding; and you showed how you were able to give love all this time, without him receiving it; too much brain chaos; but now you show us what unconditional love is; which is understood to be "sparkling a ferocious primal fire,"fueling a desire blazing with heat".... excellent images and relevant words to show the reader what your thoughts are. Best, Betty

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1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Poetic Beauty

3 Weeks Ago

There is no question about how I feel about him. He knows me inside and out and that is what this po.. read more
and I think the best answer to the question in the title...is "just because"----

Posted 3 Weeks Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

a true bond exists when the feelings this speaker has for the other are mutual.
First line, last stanza...I read as "There are many...."
when there is the dichotomy of soaring fire and calm rain in a relationship....that is perfection.
love the imagery in this..."the predatory sense" is that the two belong together.
j.

Posted 3 Weeks Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Poetic Beauty

3 Weeks Ago

I know he loves me as a person and loves me as a dear friend...
jacob erin-cilberto

3 Weeks Ago

I think the poetry one writes says a lot about who she or he is...and reading you, I feel he is quit.. read more
This is my very favorite way to say why someone loves his/her beloved. I love that you start out with the plunge, explaining why this has not been expressed prior. I tend to NOT tell people how I feel, regarding fond feelings, becuz I also assume they must realize. But people do get hungry to hear it, & I love how you gather up some pluck, conversationally with your audience, before diving in. For me, many love sentiments carry too much of this or too much of that. It's all about how the other person makes me feel good. Or it's all about how the other person looks good. Not until I read this poem of yours did I realize I've been hungry to read about love that transcends how one person is, or the other person, in a physical or literal way. I've been wanting to see it painted in words how the two people spending significant time together become something entirely different than either one separately, which is often missing from the "you are blah-blah-blah" or "I am blah-blah-blah" poems. This poem is the best I've seen that idea expressed . . . showing instead of telling (((HUGS))) Fondly, Margie

Posted 3 Weeks Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Poetic Beauty

3 Weeks Ago

Thank you very much for your kind words. I have had many years to contemplate my thoughts and years .. read more
Again I read here a new tune I didn't read before from You, the gentle giving loving and then the passionate woman giving and loving her man without asking for anything in return but to let her be whom she is and how she is, your emotions are pure here and felt deeply, the total poem is amazing but few verses stand for me,

"It has dwelled submerged inside
Surfacing to be given a voice
Unconditional Love just is
An electric spark upon meeting
A connection of the two souls
The tender moments in the quiet

It never changes its rhythm
Strumming a unique melody
Contoured to your inner being
Continually drifting towards you
Swirling with these exotic notes
Merging with your own vibration."

one of your bests without questioning. Well done my dear friend.

Posted 3 Weeks Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Poetic Beauty

3 Weeks Ago

I did post it in all it’s old unedited form. He no longer ask the question why me. He lets me have.. read more
lightsong

3 Weeks Ago

Will check it soon my dear, just going outside for the moment~ do take care of your beautiful heart.. read more
Poetic Beauty

3 Weeks Ago

Enjoy your moment. No rush on reading. It will be here whenever you have a moment

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Added on April 20, 2021
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Tags: Love, question, answers, romance, soulmate

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Poetic Beauty
Poetic Beauty

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