Thoughts, Memories, A Song and Dreams

Thoughts, Memories, A Song and Dreams

A Poem by Poetic Beauty
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Reflection of the past

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Thoughts of you crept into my mind today
With an overwhelming feeling of love
I send the splendor to you, and let it fall away

Memories slowly snuck up on my mind
Showing vivid paintings of the lost past
i sent the images to you and put them behind

A song filled my ears releasing warm tears
Causing an overflow of mixed emotions
I sent the music to you and held you near

Dreams of you floated with my sleep
Allowing me to smell your desirous scent
i sent you these movies from slumber for you to keep

Passion is still felt in the beat of the heart
Warm teardrops wash and revitalize the soul
But then deep within slumber the dreams do start

© 2010 Poetic Beauty


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A glorious, tender, heartfelt and emotive compilation of thoughts that resonate within my soul. Beautiful, vivid images conjured, extracted from a yearning heart, a longing mind, the deep sense of loss, almost indescribable, yet painfully true - so real.

Posted 8 Years Ago


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Great poem love this very much!

Posted 3 Years Ago


memories are the songs and dreams of the heart which you have captured quite eloquently in this piece~ very well penned with much emotion!!

Posted 8 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

I've never been very eloquent when reviewing so I will say this is a smashing good rhyme, and it spoke volumes to the heart. Keep being the best at your craft.

Posted 8 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Cherished memories of a long lost feeling that fore fills our dreams, that later revitalizes our souls. that’s what came to mind when I read this poem.
Excellent write.

Posted 8 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Love the flow of this.. not sure but I think the "I send, I sent" repeating sentiment really ties this all together... it is apparent with those closing lines in each stanza, that you wished for us readers to feel the reflective nature of this piece.. you nailed the mood, the feeling, perfectly conveyed... well done!

Posted 8 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

This is so emotive!
Beautifully crafted love :) Seems lamenting and cleansing in a way, wonderful poem
xx

Posted 8 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Sometimes all we have is our dreams, dreams of what might have been, dreams of how things used to be, in that other life where we once lived and loved.
A lovely poem to dream on

Posted 8 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Very good memories , you wrote them in such tender way :)

Posted 8 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Exquisitely Emotive...
Nicely done Kristina...

Posted 8 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

this is amazing very touching and sweet!

Posted 8 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.


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Poetic Beauty

corn country, IL



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First off I'm on here to post my writing to have an outlet for my emotions. You will find a variety of poems. If you like take a moment and stroll through this poets mind. Secondly be kind to each .. more..

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