Nature's Beat

Nature's Beat

A Poem by Poetic Beauty
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Longing for spring and the green scenery

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Let melodic visions fill my dreams

With peace calling in harmony

And notes flowing like bubbling streams

 

Where the sunshine is warm on my face

With its golden glow spilling down

Encompassing me with nature’s grace

 

Baby blues skies speckled with white clouds

Slowly floating on the balmy winds

Where  distractions aren’t allowed

 

Green leaves gently sway on the breeze

Dancing in the afternoon glow

To the eyes this calm sight does please

 

Soft velvety grass beneath the feet

Tickling between barefoot toes

We are grooving to nature’s beat

 

© 2011 Poetic Beauty


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Nicely written, and makes me wish i were outside feeling the balmy breeze!

Posted 7 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Ice QueenJen

7 Years Ago

to bad you aren't out here, its going to be in the 80's.... the rains gone and I should be outside,l.. read more
Poetic Beauty

7 Years Ago

I will take rain over snow any day.
Ice QueenJen

7 Years Ago

Oh me too, we are having really strange weather, its cloudy but no rain yet. And its warm, but not t.. read more
Very great poem

Posted 9 Years Ago


1 of 2 people found this review constructive.

This is a great poem... awesome job I like it!

Posted 9 Years Ago


2 of 2 people found this review constructive.

A beautiful poem. A wise person can see the beauty in the gift of nature. I like the description and the ending. A outstanding poem. Thank you.
Coyote

Posted 9 Years Ago


1 of 2 people found this review constructive.

wonderful its melodic in a way i had to check out your poetry because you intials are the same as one of my bestest friends name kristina maria soliza
close lol but I loved it
-abbie
100/100

Posted 9 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Very uplifting, like the first real sign that winter is finally leaving and spring is finally arriving. I really like this one a lot.

Posted 9 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Such a beautiful use of rhymes :)
Great ending!
Wonderful use of imagery!
I loved this :D
Great job!

Posted 9 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

A very straightforward poem, with some memorable lines. For the most part, it’s a tad awkward with lines like,’ With peace calling in harmony,’ ‘To the eyes the calm sight does please.’ Also, the second line of the last stanza seems redundant when it’s already explained the grass is beneath feet. And I’m sorry, but that last line made me cringe. It made me think of a Dee-lite music video or something.

Regards,

E


Posted 9 Years Ago


Lovely piece. Truly brings the mind straight to a warm, sunny, pleasant May day. Great description. You've got me longing for spring with this.

Posted 9 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

This is visual communication with sound effects on paper I really like how you bought the piece together. It’s so amazing out there in the middle of nowhere and listen to the sounds of nature. Nice work.

Posted 9 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.


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Poetic Beauty

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