Nature's Beat

Longing for spring and the green scenery

Let melodic visions fill my dreams

With peace calling in harmony

And notes flowing like bubbling streams

 

Where the sunshine is warm on my face

With its golden glow spilling down

Encompassing me with nature’s grace

 

Baby blues skies speckled with white clouds

Slowly floating on the balmy winds

Where  distractions aren’t allowed

 

Green leaves gently sway on the breeze

Dancing in the afternoon glow

To the eyes this calm sight does please

 

Soft velvety grass beneath the feet

Tickling between barefoot toes

We are grooving to nature’s beat

 

Reviews

[Nathan Thompson]

Sounds like this is your 'happy place' crossed with a nightclub. Flows like music with good regular sylable count. Good write

[Chelsea]

Love it! Wonderful imagery, you really had me lost in springtime! Groovin' away to the beat!

[Cheryl J. Turner]

I can practically smell spingtime! Lovely.

[Crowley]

Yeah...nothing like springtime, especially for some of our friends here that have endured a brutal winter already....Hang in there everybody! Great poem Kristina.

[ice]

-18 outside my kitchen window, this early morning..this poem warmed me up.
But I do not hate winter, it is what it is...
enjoyed
ice

[Michael Jarrell]

This really gets me excited for spring/summer. Ahhh go away cold weather! (It's 8 degrees where I am). Nice poem... I always love your work.

[Moflo]

Oh wow I loved your descriptions. Such a nice poem about nature, makes me long for summer. You had such fantastic imagery here, really a great write!

[KATHY SUE SILLS]

So beautifully done!

Where the sunshine is warm on my face
With its golden glow spilling down
Emcompassing me with nature's grace

Such peaceful feeling when I read that stanza.

[MissWordSmith]

"Where distractions aren’t allowed'' Such an interesting line there! it could mean the absence of thoughts, or the overflow of them. distraction is very debatable there. !
Very interesting!

[The Rock And Roll Cowbo..]

Getting lost in nature can be such a spiritual experience... some delightful images you have painted in my mind.