Freeing Addiction

A moment when you know it could be but hasn't happen yet

Close your sparkling eyes and drift with me
Where love's fire is eternally abundant
A place where splendor is magical and grand
Fingers entwine with names written in the sand

A quiet moment stolen within the night
Under cover in a the mythical realm
Moonlight fantasies cast their encompassing spell
Creating and intoxicating lingering smell

A time caught between present and the future
Where love can silently creep in to begin
A place where there are mythical delights
But could become sinful desirous flights

In a time not yet to be discovered
Still blanketed in a veiling white fog
Trapped in the middle of real or fiction
Oh, how I could let you become my freeing addiction

Reviews

[Ashesh]

I'd like to be there, to that unknown land, without hallucinating :)
Again a mesmerizing poem, words so well chosen that it created a glimpse of that place on readers mind. outstanding!

[MAC]

i love the rhyming flow of this and the way it ends with a catch phrase. you are a talented writer and you give the reader one thought provoking vision after another. nice write!

[Tina Kline]

So tender and romantic, so full of love and hope of what love can be. I really like the tranquil feel this poem with its promise of so much more. This is fantastic.

[KATHY SUE SILLS]

Love the flow of this, to me as I read it took on a soft tranqulitiy feel! So beautiful and sensous, but not over done! loved it!

[SpokenWord]

It is within this place of being between real and fiction that true passion builds burning at it's highest. Your verses are poetic and sweeping with sensuality and creative expressions. Loved it.

[Bubo]

Beautifully romantic, warm and dream- like, love and all it can entail.

[Jibey]

A charming romantic idyll... good with candles and soft music ... and I like the thought of such an addiction and its release...

[Lily Mae]

"A time caught between present and future".. to me that line holds to be so true throughout the poem.. I think you've penned these emotions perfectly.. x

[Robin]

such a beautiful opening line that invites one to the land of maybe ..