Medusa's Chattel

Medusa's Chattel

A Poem by Poetic Beauty
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a little mythological a bit dark

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Enslaved vocabulary has astounding actions
Syllables slung in the faces with acidic actions
Penetrating the lungs with destructive miasmic fumes
Boating allegiance to Medusa's bewitching charms

Capitulation screaming with toxic admission
Docile demeanor proudly spoken with cocky vigor
Tongue recites a dedication to bondage with bravado
Proudly parading combustion of total ensnarement 
Loathing those who would chastise conceited vocalization

Chattel's silken binds neglected with utter dispassion
As exuberance echoes across the abundant land
While Medusa slumbers contently without acknowledgement
Leaving the tattered silk to neglectfully unravel

A mirage of submission dries the vibrant oasis
Calling to the harbinger of destruction on the pale stallion
Shadowed phantasm becomes translucently clear
As the impertinent serpent slithers to another's embrace
 

© 2011 Poetic Beauty


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Enslaved vocabulary has astounding actions. Docile demeanor proudly spoken with cocky vigor while Medusa slumbers contently without acknowledgement. Syllables are slung in the faces with acidic actions I am thinking that this well penned piece is about the power of words..............well written!

Posted 8 Years Ago


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awesome work, keep it up.

Posted 7 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

I consider myself a half-decent poet, I have had people say that my poetry is good enough for print in books, but after reading some of your work I feel like I am a child writing in crayon. Your poems are incredible, I loved how you used very long and complex words in this poem while also tying them into the Medusa myth. If Perseus (had to look that one up) had seen this poem he would have revered her, not beheaded her. Very Well written

Posted 8 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Myths are my favorite. I love how you wrote this one. Like a author from the past taking the reader to a different places with different rules. You told the story with skill and create a good and wild vision. Thank you for your amazing poetry.
Coyote

Posted 8 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Your imagery is out of this world. This poem was beautiful. Your choice of words are aleays great and fun to read.

Posted 8 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

I loved this :)

Posted 8 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

I've turned to stone not getting old, took a peek under skirts so deep, now I've turned to stone.
With a snakes hiss you pretend to kiss, ah but !!!

Enjoyed, thank you :0)

Posted 8 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

It's strange to read a poem about Medusa in poetic form. You make her sound dangerous and beautiful at the same time. It would be cool to see what you could write about Aphrodite! I love everything to do with greek mythology. Great write as always! :)

Posted 8 Years Ago


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Wow! I just love your imagery. Such a beautiful way to express yourself. :)

Posted 8 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

It is really great poetry.The beginning heralds the poetic beauty that follows.You are REALLY a poetic beauty.
yoursJVL

Posted 8 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Love the Vocab myself. This is quite a different write than what I usually read. I like it found it intriguing.

Posted 8 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.


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Poetic Beauty
Poetic Beauty

corn country, IL



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