Ectomorphic Atmosphere

Ectomorphic Atmosphere

A Poem by Poetic Beauty
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Creative Poetry group words enthusiastic, slimsy, ectomorphic, pallid, relevant

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The ectomorphic atmosphere 
Left a pallid taste 
in her ambitious 
mouth

Pallid desires
Left slimsy direction
In a catatonic world
of enthusiastic void

Where relevant 
Yearnings 
Erupt with
Volcanic lava
Crimson turned to 
gray ash

Churning passion
Washes away
A plastic aftertaste
Drizzling life
With scarlet 
Melodies

© 2012 Poetic Beauty


Compartment 114
Compartment 114
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A swirling mass of perfectly rendeered words, a most talented rising of pieced framed, well done, good read.

Posted 12 Years Ago


Clever use of words, brilliant masterpiece!

Posted 12 Years Ago


Love it love it... but that last stanza is perfect.. I love the way you expressed those closing thoughts...xo

Posted 12 Years Ago


You used your words to express a very strong poem! Excellent talent used here.

Posted 12 Years Ago


Excellent write, nice flow. Love the first and last stanza.

Posted 12 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

I love the repeating sounds and I feel the distaste of your subject. lovely.

Posted 12 Years Ago


Kewl use of the words... I woulda come up with Slimer form goshtbusters lol ;)

Posted 12 Years Ago


This is great writing, very creative use of the listed words.

Posted 12 Years Ago


I love the way everyone can spin a different tale using the same words. An amazing write, beautifully done.

Posted 12 Years Ago


hard words to fashion.... what to do, where to go, .. challenging. You stepped up in fine form.
The first stanza sets a strong picture, the best of the quartet.

Posted 12 Years Ago



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Added on January 28, 2012
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Poetic Beauty
Poetic Beauty

corn country, IL



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