Taking a Stroll

I took a walk

Through my mind

Today

Finding you

Standing right

Where I left you

 

Bathed in sunlight

Tattooed in my dreams

It seemed real

But I know it was only

Make-believe

 

I took a stroll

Through my heart

Today

Hearing it sing

Melodies

Of your name

With a rhythmic beat

 

I know the

Song is real

But to touch

Your skin

My hand may

Never meet

 

I gazed upon

My soul today

Taking a deep

Look inside

She is linked

To you

In the most

Mysterious way

 

No physical

Reason for it

To be

But intrigued

By you

She is completely

 

 

Reviews

[KATHY SUE SILLS]

This piece had me captivated as if I was on that jounery in my mind!

[KAREN]

Love the title, makes me wonder what I would find if I was to take a stroll through my mind and heart. Love the emotion in this piece.

[Coyote Poetry]

A powerful tale in the poem. I like the journey you took me with. I like the way you led the reader to the ending. A poem to create thoughts and questions. Thank you for the excellent poem.
Coyote

[Jeremy Baker]

Quite intriguing! Very enjoyable read.

[Michael X]

Reasons that beg the magic to cede to the moment when thoughts grow wings then wish to know what it would feel like to dream while walking off a cliff of so many memories gone the way of the poet. this captivating work :)

[Thomas Fitzgerald]

Perfect flow and timing is great, well done, good read.

[LonelySoul]

She is completely...left me wanting more,hungry for the touch her scent...

[Tim Lion]

Very cool. Like the casual tone....like it's extremely passionate, but, with a cool, calm poker face. I find the general mood of the piece eddply engaging....almost intoxicating in it's intricate human howl.
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[roarke]

a lyrical introspection.

[Larry Dyson]

No physical

Reason for it

To be

But intrigued

By you

She is completely
very impressed by these words...and thoughts