Entered Your City?

If I graffitied your name

On the Brooklyn bridge

Surrounded by hearts

And roses

Would you know

It was me

Trying to gain

Your undivided attention?

 

If I spray painted

A poem with

Gothic flare

And crimson desire

Would you know

It was I

Who wrote

Such a vivid

Tell all display?

 

If I flew out there

And tattooed

Your words on my

Thigh

Would you know

I had even

Entered your city?

 

 

Reviews

[Sweets]

Loved the imagery used in here =)
Wonderful work!

[Jeremy Baker]

Quite abstract in a number of ways with oblique references and images - really made me work! I liked it!

[*~*Butterfly Kisses*~*]

Wonderfully creative imagery expressed within this piece. This is a really clever write, in regards to just getting someone to notice who you are. Nicely done.

[KATHY SUE SILLS]

Love the imagery that burns in this piece! Sometimes you through your heart into love for another and it just get stepped on like they are blind! Such a well written piece!

[KAREN]

Sometimes it dosen't matter what you do, it always goes unnoticed. Your poem expresses love that needs to be noticed, a yearning to feel his love returned.
Very nicely done.

[Lily Mae]

I think if he didn't notice he'd have to be a fool.. Your desire and passion and force is wildly perfect here.. You know I'm loving this one..xo

[Zeitgeist Manifesto]

Back off lovers...
She's here to take over.
You're so Alpha.

[Cassie Fraga]

confronting and questioning... nice!! can never go wrong with that... love your word play as always!!!

[Michael X]

The simplicity of this poem as a dark scarlet wonder, steel city nights, vividness and heart keeps the meaning next to the heart of a pale enchantment. If to give all then realize it has gone too far. Your words command the page :)

[Coyote Poetry]

Great use of words and thoughts in the poem. I like the many questions open up by this poem. Some tattoos are needed to be seen to be understood. No weakness in the amazing poetry.
Coyote