Hush Upon the Wind

Hush Upon the Wind

A Poem by Poetic Beauty
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something a little calming and heartfelt

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The mind gently wonders

In the direction of the East

Enjoying the stillness

And the sensuality of peace

 

Dreaming in melodic

Hues that vary in shades

From purple passion

To crimson as the sunset fades

 

Thoughts drifting of summer

Evenings under the stars

And mornings drifting on

Desires tides

 

Where one soothing voice

Becomes a seeking lullaby

Dancing across the distance

Where the heart confides

Its abysmal secrets

That have been locked up

Hiding in the sands of time

 

Whispers of the East

Glide across the soul

Thundering with promise

Of things that maybe

 

The body shudders

With compulsive need

But the voice remains

Silent only a hush upon

The delicate wind

© 2012 Poetic Beauty


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Desire tides? Fabulous. I'm so glad you didn't write "desire of the tides". That would have been generic. This is a nice twist. The "hush upon the...wind" is a great thing to have as the crux of the poem. Whispering winds seem to be the motif here. Great message. Nice delivery. Well done!

Posted 8 Years Ago


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"But the voice remains
Silent only a hush upon
The delicate wind" - brilliant lines.

I agree, it was a soothing read. Loved it.

Posted 7 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Poetic Beauty

7 Years Ago

Thank you. This poem has a very deep meaning for me.
I agree with Laura. It has such a great message and part of the greatness of it was the delivery. J'adore!

Posted 7 Years Ago


Poetic Beauty

7 Years Ago

This poem has a great depth of emotion and many layers to it.
"Thoughts drifting of summer
Evenings under the stars
And mornings drifting on
Desires tides" that is beautiful, love the flow and imagery through out this piece. Feeling the emotions coming together here

Posted 7 Years Ago


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Poetic Beauty

7 Years Ago

Thank you very much
The wind like the breath of a horse at your shoulder,reminds you of presence ,power, passion, life's alters ,left unswept ,distant, turning your souls compass as you step through today.

Posted 7 Years Ago


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Poetic Beauty

7 Years Ago

night time is one of my favorite time of day. It is magical and mysterious romantic and peaceful
what a sweet write

:)

Posted 8 Years Ago


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Poetic Beauty

8 Years Ago

Thank you
Peace beautifully expressed...

Posted 8 Years Ago


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Poetic Beauty

8 Years Ago

A great calm moment
wow this is so peaceful

Posted 8 Years Ago


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Colleen a Bean

8 Years Ago

lol I love when I have that but it doesnt happen often
Poetic Beauty

8 Years Ago

Many if mine are written when I am calm
Colleen a Bean

8 Years Ago

lol I guess I am not calm often haha
You had me all the way through then wowed me with the last stanza.. you always know how to drive the thoughts home :) xo

Posted 8 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Colorful, creative and alluring!
Nicely done Kristina.

Posted 8 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

A beautiful and peaceful poem. Nice to feel a gentle breeze and have thoughts of people and places. I like the gentle feel of the statements and the very good ending. Thank you for the outstanding poetry.
Coyote

Posted 8 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.


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