Piece Of Heaven

Piece Of Heaven

A Poem by Marvin Lewis Jr.
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For a woman I once knew...

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 Piece of heaven


Let me message your feet until you forget they  were

meant for walking...

Your shoulders, back, and waist  until you feel as

though you've left the body.

Beneath the purest form of relaxation this is your

day,

I'll sit beside the tub while you soak and read a

story.

Watch as your eyes get heavy I am filled with joy

because my favorite past time is admiring you while

asleep,

 I nominate It for the world's eighth wonder the

melody I hear made by the stars  that twinkle when you

breathe,

your skin is so radiant the moon says to the night sky

what about me?

I just wish I was there when God said let there be

light and it was...

Let there be a startling gorgeous

creature without peer and here you are.

My piece of heaven. 



© 2006 Marvin Lewis Jr.

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

© 2008 Marvin Lewis Jr.


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Kinda speechless.... knocked me off my feet, but I'll stand back up and preach now what I felt.
Whom ever this woman may be, she seems like such a Goddess to you, it's nearly heart warming because you would do anything to slave to her needs and wants. - Mmmm what a true man he is!

"I just wish I was there when God said let there be
light and it was...
Let there be a startling gorgeous
creature without peer and here you are.
My piece of heaven. "

Those lines stood out the most to me. It's nice when you feel so close to someone, that they simply are your angel and you would kill yourself just so you can be where she is, in this heaven she creates for you. This is so romantic, my god you have a sensational way with your words if I must admit. This is what ever woman would wish for in a man, and I bet you'll make the dream husband when the time comes my friend.

Posted 12 Years Ago


2 of 2 people found this review constructive.




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The thing I love most about this poem is that this can be applied to men as well as women. Reading this poem, I think of my other half currently snoring in the bedroom.

- A little tiny correction below...
"Let me massage your feet..."

Posted 11 Years Ago


Kinda speechless.... knocked me off my feet, but I'll stand back up and preach now what I felt.
Whom ever this woman may be, she seems like such a Goddess to you, it's nearly heart warming because you would do anything to slave to her needs and wants. - Mmmm what a true man he is!

"I just wish I was there when God said let there be
light and it was...
Let there be a startling gorgeous
creature without peer and here you are.
My piece of heaven. "

Those lines stood out the most to me. It's nice when you feel so close to someone, that they simply are your angel and you would kill yourself just so you can be where she is, in this heaven she creates for you. This is so romantic, my god you have a sensational way with your words if I must admit. This is what ever woman would wish for in a man, and I bet you'll make the dream husband when the time comes my friend.

Posted 12 Years Ago


2 of 2 people found this review constructive.

What a beautiful poem. Every woman's dream come true in poetry form. Thank you for sharing. Debileah

Posted 12 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Amazing , A man that must have loved a woman once. Well done .

Posted 12 Years Ago


2 of 2 people found this review constructive.

I hope your happy with youself making wifes glare at their husbands and
girlfriends roll their eyes at their boys. I think every female is jealous of
the woman you wrote this to. The poem was great I could visualize it to a tee,
and I love the format. I like it as you can tell. What makes this piece so great
is how u describe your actions as if you were taking a beautiful journey. In this
poem your tucking her into bed, but in your mind your gently dedicating yourself
to her. I'm floored.

Posted 12 Years Ago


2 of 2 people found this review constructive.

WOW!! every womens words to hear.... amazing, almost took it right out of my mouth, and to my someones ear... very nice....

Posted 12 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Let there be a startling gorgeous creature without peer and here you are. My piece of heaven.

There are three poems I could write with these three lines. You combine them into 1 poem that speaks so loudly. Very creative and a poet among poet that stands out from the rest. Amazing!


Posted 12 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Beautiful....i love the feel....i love the expression; the romanticism....lovely poem.

Posted 13 Years Ago


Wow....very rare to find a man who can express adoration in such a way. Fantastic!

Posted 13 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

I really loved this:)
So romantic and well out together.
Very sweet!
Good job!

Posted 13 Years Ago


2 of 2 people found this review constructive.


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Marvin Lewis Jr.

Trenton, NJ



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I'm 19 y.o. and I write lyrics, prose, poetry, and treatments. I'm currently self-publishing my first book entitled "The Language Of My Imagination" which consist of poetry and prose that touch on suc.. more..

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