I love you, do you love me,

I love you, do you love me,

A Poem by poetic minds

Oh, baby

When we first lingered
Into each others presents
Oh, my heart fumbled
Into a musk dim decent

My feet fell numb
These knees are failing me
I'm feeling dumb
Darling you make me free

I, fail, no breath to your eyes
My, pail, face made by one cry
Oh, I'm falling deep to your eyes
And that is just simple to word
But what is this,
If you really don't mean a word
Our eyes will kiss
Because we both mean every word

So it's true
That, do you love me
I love you
Oh, you're all I need

And so much more
An ocean, when all I need
A glass or more
Eye's motion, too, you need me

Now here we are
With a burning life in each wave
Glowing with the stars
You and I are
A bonded wind that's set to save
More than what we are

These grains of sand
You stole the stars and sky
Were hand in hand
Love, when you shift your eyes
Do you know
What you do
When you glow
So perfect
You do grow
Like a crushing love
Coming up like a dove
Dropping down from above

I love you
I love you with more than my heart
Oh yes with all of my being
No one tells how love is so sharp
Oh you fill all that I'm seeing

Do you love me
I cant take this lack of words
Eating me like wicked swords
Your smile so devious,
But, you're so addictive
You know that I need this
What, you're so intuitive

Do you love me, like you know I love you
Do you need me, like you know I need you
 I need you
I love you
And hold
All the way through
Through this long life
Always so true
We have tonight

I love you
You love me too

© 2009 poetic minds

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poetic minds
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