Cry out your pain and let others suffer with you

Repelling from any memory that might cause pain

And attracting those who cause it

Death's wrath has taken its toll once again

But this time its different

Death's wrath has brought nothing bad

More defined as he's brought nothing at all

Death is leaving me be

Instead I see all the beauty

Like a blind man seeing the sun for the first time

The world is colorful

The world is wonderful

But it could be better

I can't complain though

I have those who love me

And I'm grateful

God has taught me my lessons

I've learned a lot

And then I met you

And I just might believe that you're my angel

I've heard sounds even more beautiful than the morning birds

And I've heard the angels sing

Or not, perhaps it was just an echo

But you're my angel

And I thank God for letting me have you

Because I'm finally happy

Or not, I can't be quite sure...

Reviews

[Aekmy]

"And I've heard the angels sing
Or not, perhaps it was just an echo"
I love the uncertainty of this peice. The author seems so sure, yet so vague. Nicely done. (:
I like the analogie of seeing deaths beauty to a blind man seeing the sun for the first time. Though I think you could have come up with something a bit less general and I think you should try a different format in which you would break your lines up differently. Give the poems a different feel. If I'm not mistaken, most of your poems are in this format and regretably I read them all the same way. D: Bad habit, I know.
Oh, by the way, your picture doesn't work. Hehe. Just letting you know. :D
Well, take care good friend, :) And have a blessed day.