Revenge for Death

Revenge for Death

A Poem by mae-mae<3
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R.I.P Harry. March 2, 2005

"

Tears fall all around

A loved one lost

Never got to say my good-byes

Crying for the one who has meant the most

It seems as if I'm the one that died

Or at least that's how it feels

I feel cold, unmoving

Only when realization hits do the tears really come

He's not coming back

I never thought I'd cry so hard

You might think I'm crazy for saying this

But I've never cried harder for anyone

But he's not a human

He's not even a dog

He was God's gift to me

He's the one that's saved me

And now he's gone

Lost into forever

Never coming back

No matter how much I pray

I have my memories of the animal

But they're slipping slowly

Death's wrath  has taken it's toll on me once again

And this time I want revenge

© 2009 mae-mae<3


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So heart rending

Death of a loved one and the bereavement that follows .. It's something we all will or have already experienced in life, be it for a human, or animal (it's just the same) and i can understand the fury haunting you .. the absence seems so tormenting that the only things revolving around your head are revenge and questions .. and somewhere you feel dead along too, as life has got no meaning without the one who 'meant the most' for you. It's hard, we all know .. so all you can do is hope for a new day when you'll be better (though inside of you you know everything's shattered and lost within) .. but however, you should muster the courage to lead on your life .. life goes on .. death follows .. and no one can stop that

That was a beautiful defined piece of how one can feel after a beloved's death

I loved those lines (to which i can relate, as I've went through that too):

"I feel cold, unmoving
Only when realization hits do the tears really come
He's not coming back"

As it is indeed a very hard feeling to know that he will never come back and all you have left are your tears and desperation ...

So Good Luck, and Take Care of yourself ..



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