Immature Children of The Older Ages

Immature Children of The Older Ages

A Poem by mae-mae<3

Silly girls caught up in all the drama

Stupid boys starting it

Immature children starting rumors

To bring the cold hard b***h down

Insults and Jokes

Tears and Shoulders

Back stabbing

Sometimes you say to much

And it ruins your prime

Get a bad reputation

And you're done for good

Wanna-bes and Posers

Girls with the big egos

Who think we all love them

But we hate their guts!

W****s and B*****s

Pimps and Players

Never a dull moment

No matter how much it hurts

Broken  Hearts

Broken Dreams

Just kindergarten all over again

Immature little kids

Trying to find a way to fit in

Stupid Stupid Children

Truely annoying

But hey...

That's highschool

That's life....

© 2009 mae-mae<3


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Definitely down to earth. But I agree with Emma, you could break it into at least two to three stanzas, starting with breaking it up at "Just kindergarten kids all over again"...

However, it's your writing, so you call the shots.

Reminds me of the stuff from when I was your age. [I started writing when I was in 8th grade - 13 yrs old.] :-)

Posted 10 Years Ago


Haha, this is so true and down to earth. I really liked it. I'm not sure if this was the style, but I think you could've broken this up into a couple of stanzas.
Great job! (:

Posted 11 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Amen sista ;]

Posted 12 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.


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