SNAFU

SNAFU

A Poem by poetsblade
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Funny but Not...

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SNAFU
 
People at the gas tank
Feeling robbed
People willing to work
Can’t get no job
Where do you go
When it all falls down
Try and go forward
You get turned around
 
Like trying to drink
From an empty cup
Situation Normal
All Fucked Up!
 
People trying to find
Something to eat
Go to the grocer
Can’t trust the meat
Where do you go
When it all falls down
Try and go forward
You get turned around
 
Like trying to drink
From an empty cup
Situation Normal
All Fucked Up!
 
Nobody understands
What’s going on
Try to hold it together
Just comes undone
Where do you go
When it all falls down
Try and go forward
You get turned around
 
Like trying to drink
From an empty cup
Situation Normal
All Fucked Up!
 

© 2008 poetsblade


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I agree, sounds like a song to me--and a good one at that.

Posted 13 Years Ago


Definately written as a song, and a good one. Repetition can destroy, or enhance a poem/song. It takes skill to make it fit. You have done it with this piece. You need to find a good musician. Rain..

Posted 15 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.


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Added on July 27, 2008

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poetsblade
poetsblade

Loganville, GA



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