doggee

doggee

A Poem by String Telephone

me & girl fren cry
me & girl shad
ppl steel r doggee
thay eet doggee
thay tole me doggee dorishes
me & girl fren mad
me & girl fren no like ppl eet doggee.

© 2013 String Telephone


Author's Note

String Telephone
me no like ppl eet doggee

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Hope this didn't really happen, that's no good that somebody would eat your doggy.

Posted 7 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

String Telephone

7 Years Ago

yah dumb dumb ppl eat doggee :(
String Telephone

7 Years Ago

he he he ty ty ty
Bluefire

6 Years Ago

Lol your welcome
It's a dog eat dog world out there sometimes, ST. Hang in there. :)

Posted 7 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

String Telephone

7 Years Ago

he he he ty ty ty
Wow this is just terrible. So Terrible it's funny. I...wow. :)

Posted 9 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

String Telephone

9 Years Ago

He he he ty ty ty
It's kinda hard to understand but you and your girlfriend's dog gets stolen then eaten right? Grammar can always improve and include more of a story to it, and in result you get a better poem! :) just trying to help ^-^

Posted 10 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

MayoCat

10 Years Ago

No problem I wish you luck in improving and practicing your English skills! :) (^-^)
String Telephone

10 Years Ago

ty me try me danno y ppl eet doggee me shad ppl chop chop doggee :-(
MayoCat

10 Years Ago

I don't like people who eat dogs either. It's mean and cruel.
methinks someone could do with speech therapy! and dogs in China are considered a delicacy. Are you from China?

Posted 10 Years Ago


2 of 2 people found this review constructive.

String Telephone

10 Years Ago

^(•?•)^ ty ty ty he he he""""""""
Someone stole your dog and ate it? That is all I can make of this.....a little "out there" and very different, for sure. Lydi*

Posted 10 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

String Telephone

10 Years Ago

(•!•) ty ty ty he he he he he"""""
Haha ok then! Nice;).....

Posted 10 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

String Telephone

10 Years Ago

*(^=^)* ty ty ty he he he""""""
This was soooo cute...Bravo...:>)

Posted 10 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Sami Khalil

10 Years Ago

^^~^^ :)..................
String Telephone

10 Years Ago

(*~*) he he he he he'''''
Sami Khalil

10 Years Ago

ho ho ho ho ...:)....................

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Added on October 19, 2013
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String Telephone
String Telephone

Mongolia



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