I would if I could

I would if I could

A Poem by Emily Dickinson Jr.
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Its about understanding that you can't change the past

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If i could give a name
for fate
 

I would be twisted all the same
 
If i could live another moment
 

I would wish for one-thousand more
 
If i thought there
Was a chance
For redemption
 

I would spend all my time on that
 
But its not there
I couldn't care
 
Its all the same
Never ending
every year
 
 
 

© 2012 Emily Dickinson Jr.


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Oooo, that was very well worded. :o I loved it! :D It was greatly potent by the few lines it was about how things can't be changed ^w^ it was awesome! Woot WOOT! :D

Posted 7 Years Ago


You speak the truth! It's terrible isn't it? Well composed. An enjoyable read, thanks for sharing!

Posted 7 Years Ago


Continous mayhem, the circle is always spinning!
Beautifully composed xox

Posted 7 Years Ago


Emily Dickinson Jr.

7 Years Ago

Thanx so much Poppy :-D
Ruth

7 Years Ago

Most welcome xox
we can't change the past but we can learn from it... well done!

Posted 7 Years Ago


Emily Dickinson Jr.

7 Years Ago

thanx so much heather!!! :-D
TEAR :,( So true yet sad.

Posted 7 Years Ago


Emily Dickinson Jr.

7 Years Ago

it is isnt it
LadyBug

7 Years Ago

YES :((
Found this emotional piece just when i was thinking 'if i knew it then i would have ........' Nice. you voiced it very well!

Posted 7 Years Ago


Emily Dickinson Jr.

7 Years Ago

aww thanx so much :-) im rly happy you found what you needed
Hi Emily, A very sad but poignant piece. Well set out in a 'stark' exposed style that feels like the struggle to understand life and its often meaningless futures.

Posted 7 Years Ago


Emily Dickinson Jr.

7 Years Ago

aww thanx so much john!!! I'm glad you enjoyed it
Such a meaningful poem
wonderful job :)
thank you for sharing!

Posted 7 Years Ago


Emily Dickinson Jr.

7 Years Ago

its always my pleasure allycat!! thanks for reviewing :-D

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