My Angel

I used some japanese teminology in this poem; It's an extremely sweet love poem Aishiteru- I love you tenshi- angel

I care for you dearly

My sweet sugar pie

 

My precious

My sweet

Greater than I

 

My holy

My solice

My purity child

 

My taker of scorn

Please stay for a while

 

My spicy heart

My comfy love

 

My angel,

My sun

Straight

Sent from above

 

Just like a dove

As it's world

It does fly

 

My angel

My dove

My aishiteru love

 

You're greater than I

A celestrial Tenshi

An angel

Once shoved

 

Im glad your not broken

For if you were

I would be sulken

 

Because my heart

It has been stolen

 

 

Reviews

[Black Rose]

Its so beautiful, I loved it.

[Emily Dickinson Jr.]

lol thanx I'm glad you enjoyed it :-)

[Mizuki Tsukiakari]

Awww, kawaii! (so cute, but I think I spelled it wrong ;p ) I REALLY like this! It's so precious, and it made me think of my baby

[Emily Dickinson Jr.]

Don't worry you spelled kawaii correctly at least I think you did! :-) I'm glad you enjoyed it and thats exactly the type of thing I aimed for in this poem. I actually do think of a small child.

[Mizuki Tsukiakari]

Lol. I refer to my boyfriend as baby :) But I can see that you can realate it to a child.

[Emily Dickinson Jr.]

aww well my poems are versatile lol

[Mizuki Tsukiakari]

Yep! They mean something different to each person :)

[Emily Dickinson Jr.]

And thats just the way I like them

[eatmills]

Very interesting timing. I really loved the words you have used to show your love. It made my cold black heart melt, Thank you.

[Emily Dickinson Jr.]

Im really glad you liked it! also most of my poems do have a unique sort of timing alot of ppl comment on that :-)

[eatmills]

It really has a beat rhythm to it, that I just love.

[Emily Dickinson Jr.]

I'm glad you like it so much its probally bcuz I dnt usually do a specific type of poem and just write as I like :-)

[Abbie]

beautiful. that's the first thought that comes to mind when I read this. simply beautiful. great job Hannah! keep it up!

[Emily Dickinson Jr.]

Thanx abbie!! I'm glad you like it :-)

[anxia]

Sweet!

[Emily Dickinson Jr.]

thanx:-)

[Aehr]

awesome job done here.. I really liked it. Keep writing!!

[Emily Dickinson Jr.]

thanx! sometimes I like to sneek japanese into my writing

[Aehr]

oh, you know japanese, completely? that's interesting.

[Emily Dickinson Jr.]

yeah I taught myself

[Aehr]

oh, that's nice! i tried teaching myself spanish once, but then I lost track of it because of schoolwork... but I plan to learn it whenever I get the chance! I want to learn french and greek too!!!

[Emily Dickinson Jr.]

im currently teaching myself spaish, japanese, and chinese

[Aehr]

that's awesome! When do you get the time?

[Emily Dickinson Jr.]

lol before bed, before school, during school in my notebooks, lunch, in the car, on the bus, hehehe im vry good at finding time

[Aehr]

oh.. lucky you! even after having so much time to waste, i do stupid stuff and ... I don't have time :P

[Emily Dickinson Jr.]

lol u just gta manage it right

[♥ Kinnixk]

Your greater than I - you're

I love the vocab in this :) Nice job Hannah! :D

[Emily Dickinson Jr.]

aww thanx! lol

[♥ Kinnixk]

You're welcome (: