Tiny heart beater

this is a poem about nature which can also be understood as being a metaphor , whatever you like read if you wna know more! plz + thank u!

Little heart bird

Fly to sky

My little one

Flutter, flutter

make yourself be heard

Sweet heart

Your home is near, dear

Dear beater

don't pray, give

Beat, beat, beater

Take your part 

you will live

Little beater in my hand

Keep on beating

By my command

 

Reviews

[Blue Ivory]

Beautiful!

[Yheela]

A very good poem, and lovely that it can be read in more ways than one.

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A great poem and metaphor! I loved how u wrote this, makes it feel real! 100/100 :D
I wish u could put more than 100 % :D

[JB Murray]

Nice little write

[Emily Dickinson Jr.]

aww thanx :)

[Allycat]

This poem is really cute! I really like this, and the imagery that comes to mind as I read this
Thank you for sharing

[Emily Dickinson Jr.]

lol thanx so much

[James William Dyer]

interesting. huymmingbird, right? I'd focus on the sounds they make a little more, but i liked how this read

[Emily Dickinson Jr.]

yeah! :-) i guess i cud focus on that more but my nature isnt very naturalistic. it is usually based on emotion and is filled with many different ties to human emotion and experience. describing the sound of the birds wings wudnt have suceeded in what my type of poetry does. its just not rly my style lol

[♋ Iris ♋]

Interesting read. I liked it~!

[Emily Dickinson Jr.]

thanx!

[Coyote Poetry]

Photo and words were amazing. I like the description and the desire in your words.
"Dear beater
don't pray, give"
Thank you for sharing the excellent poetry.
Coyote

[Emily Dickinson Jr.]

it's no problem at all coyote! You know how I love to share with you all. It just makes it all the better that you enjoyed it.

[J. Viands]

How sweet:) fantastic as always

[Emily Dickinson Jr.]

aww thanx so much!

[Hester Vane]

Beautiful as always! The format is very well suited to the content of the poem also!

[Emily Dickinson Jr.]

your so kind hester! thank you! :-)