Drunk

Drunk

A Poem by Emily Dickinson Jr.
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A poem about the tragedy alchohol can rein on your life. How blinding it can be and how people can't coddle your addiction forever. Something has to give.

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The bottle is my best friend.

 

" I though that was, I  "

 

It makes all my pain go away.

 

"   I bet you can't feel "

"  I bet you can't cry "

 

Nothing could go wrong.

 

You used to be so strong ... "

 

I'm not hurting anybody

 

"   Look, Love, in the ruddy ditch... "

"  Call your parents "

"  They won't answer... "

 

It's normal!

I'm youthful, Im cool!

 

"  Look at the roadways on your skin "

 

I'll quit.

 

"  You said that last year. "

"  And the year before, and the year before.. "

 

Baby, I'm sorry.

 

" No, your not. "

" Your really not.. "

 

Oh, s**t ..

Baby. I'm s**t.

I'v been.

 

"  Yes, you are, and I'm gone."

"  Don't come near me again " 

 

 

 

 

© 2012 Emily Dickinson Jr.


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Drinking destroys people.

Those who it doesn't kill, it makes them addicts.

Those who it doens't make addicts, it robs their lives. They can only be themselves when the've had a 'nip'

Posted 8 Years Ago


Emily Dickinson Jr.

8 Years Ago

thats completely what I was going for in this poem!! i was trying to raise awareness!!
Steven Cash

8 Years Ago

Well, kudos to you!
I'm such a sucker for rhyming.

Posted 8 Years Ago


Emily Dickinson Jr.

8 Years Ago

I take that as a compliment lol
Rallaa

8 Years Ago

Good. It was meant as one.
I like your rhymes.
Your work is interesting. Keep it up. :]
Emily Dickinson Jr.

8 Years Ago

Than I try for unique I don't want to be a writer of overdone cliches
It's good to write about the harsh realities of life. You did a good job with this ;)

Posted 8 Years Ago


Emily Dickinson Jr.

8 Years Ago

thans so much Enid! I try :-)
Rough thing to go through. Just quitting on them?

Posted 8 Years Ago


Emily Dickinson Jr.

8 Years Ago

she did this poem symbolizes a long relationship. Each line symbolizes several years. Cudnt you te.. read more
Rtrt

8 Years Ago

I did not see that. Thank you for pointing that out. Sorry, I should have simmered on it longer befo.. read more
Emily Dickinson Jr.

8 Years Ago

lol it's alright I knw that some of my poems can be pretty cryptic in their entire meaning even when.. read more
Sad incident.
Great write

Posted 8 Years Ago


Emily Dickinson Jr.

8 Years Ago

thank you! :-)
zainul

8 Years Ago

You are welcome! :-)

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Added on August 14, 2012
Last Updated on August 18, 2012
Tags: drunk, alchohul, addiction, beer, pitty, love, heartbreak

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Emily Dickinson Jr.
Emily Dickinson Jr.

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