Harmony

Harmony

A Poem by Emily Dickinson Jr.
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A love poem about how love can be hot and cold which can have musical metaphors.

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Harmony my love

 

You move my being

 And my soul

 

I love and I hate you

With the intensity

Of the heavens above

 

For taking my control

And being the only thing

To make me whole

© 2012 Emily Dickinson Jr.


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Short, sweet, simple, awesome!

Posted 7 Years Ago


That space between love and hate can be so wafer thin.
An honest, deeply felt write.

Posted 7 Years Ago


Emily Dickinson Jr.

7 Years Ago

thanx so much that is exactly what I was thinking
It swirled off the pages so beautifully, i can feel what you mean. Oh its perfect, well said. :D

Posted 7 Years Ago


Mariah Corey

7 Years Ago

np, thnx for writing. :D
Emily Dickinson Jr.

7 Years Ago

always
Mariah Corey

7 Years Ago

:D
This has that spin of something of a fortune cookie and almost a song, nice blend of image and words.

Posted 7 Years Ago


Emily Dickinson Jr.

7 Years Ago

lol thanx?
love and hate are usually very closely intertwined. You capture that well here.

Posted 7 Years Ago


Emily Dickinson Jr.

7 Years Ago

thank you thats what I was going for :-)
A harmonious poem with deep felt meanings ...
Thank you for sharing...

Posted 7 Years Ago


Emily Dickinson Jr.

7 Years Ago

its no problem lol i love it
Sami Khalil

7 Years Ago

You are welcome...
Harmony, anything about that deal is good by me. Even harmony in noise if you reach for it. A change in subject for you, nice.

Posted 7 Years Ago


shultzfeather

7 Years Ago

Harmony is also harmony right? Sometimes its cool to let the reader go ahead with its own head. I .. read more
Emily Dickinson Jr.

7 Years Ago

lol sorry!
shultzfeather

7 Years Ago

so funny, wow, thats how you take me, damn, bull s**t, ")
Love pulls, release, pulls, and release, love is LOVE, but if you mix the letters, it is EVOL Love is the perfect lover, and hater in one. I love love. I balance it, so hate can never enter. Clever and lovely write!!

E.L.

Posted 7 Years Ago


Emily Dickinson Jr.

7 Years Ago

thanx once again you really dont know how much your reviews mean to me :-D

7 Years Ago

Awww it's a pleasure dear :) always
Emily Dickinson Jr.

7 Years Ago

hehehe :-)
Well said! It is a thin line my friend! Nice write! Great message!

Posted 7 Years Ago


Priscilla Sayers

7 Years Ago

:) Big smiles for your sweet Hannah! happy to have the pleasure of enjoying your work!
Emily Dickinson Jr.

7 Years Ago

your reviews make me so happy! :-D
Priscilla Sayers

7 Years Ago

:)

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Added on August 20, 2012
Last Updated on August 27, 2012
Tags: music, harmony, love, hate, hot, cold, pain, desire, soul mate, fear, whole, heaven

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Emily Dickinson Jr.
Emily Dickinson Jr.

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Im just a highschool girl. Writing is my hobby and I think Im fairly good at it but I leave you to be the judge of that. :-) my best short stories are: http://www.writerscafe.org/writing/poisinros.. more..

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