Harmony

A love poem about how love can be hot and cold which can have musical metaphors.

 

Harmony my love

 

You move my being

 And my soul

 

I love and I hate you

With the intensity

Of the heavens above

 

For taking my control

And being the only thing

To make me whole

Reviews

[Blue Belle]

Short, sweet, simple, awesome!

[Tree]

That space between love and hate can be so wafer thin.
An honest, deeply felt write.

[Emily Dickinson Jr.]

thanx so much that is exactly what I was thinking

[Mariah Corey]

It swirled off the pages so beautifully, i can feel what you mean. Oh its perfect, well said. :D

[Emily Dickinson Jr.]

thanx so much im glad you like it

[Mariah Corey]

np, thnx for writing. :D

[Emily Dickinson Jr.]

always

[Mariah Corey]

:D

[MoriartyMesa]

This has that spin of something of a fortune cookie and almost a song, nice blend of image and words.

[Emily Dickinson Jr.]

lol thanx?

[Ryan Halterman]

love and hate are usually very closely intertwined. You capture that well here.

[Emily Dickinson Jr.]

thank you thats what I was going for :-)

[Sami Khalil]

A harmonious poem with deep felt meanings ...
Thank you for sharing...

[Emily Dickinson Jr.]

its no problem lol i love it

[Sami Khalil]

You are welcome...

[shultzfeather]

Harmony, anything about that deal is good by me. Even harmony in noise if you reach for it. A change in subject for you, nice.

[Emily Dickinson Jr.]

Harmony's the girls name. at least thats how I meant it lol

[shultzfeather]

Harmony is also harmony right? Sometimes its cool to let the reader go ahead with its own head. I did read your explanation later and i love her too. She is Harmony. My Harmony is capitalized too, in my own mind you know. Your Harmony is my Harmony, right? One time I told this lady how I meant a poem and she was devastated, thought she was evil for thinking the way she did. I never interpreted a poem after. You didn't devastate me but I did feel a little dumb. :)

[Emily Dickinson Jr.]

lol sorry!

[shultzfeather]

so funny, wow, thats how you take me, damn, bull s**t, ")

[Emily Dickinson Jr.]

Love pulls, release, pulls, and release, love is LOVE, but if you mix the letters, it is EVOL Love is the perfect lover, and hater in one. I love love. I balance it, so hate can never enter. Clever and lovely write!!

E.L.

[Emily Dickinson Jr.]

Thank you so much. people often forget the saying " hate is just a breath away from love" and it is so true

Yes, it is so true, Harmony and Balance dear one. You did a splendid job

[Emily Dickinson Jr.]

thanx once again you really dont know how much your reviews mean to me :-D

Awww it's a pleasure dear :) always

[Emily Dickinson Jr.]

hehehe :-)

[Priscilla Sayers]

Well said! It is a thin line my friend! Nice write! Great message!

[Emily Dickinson Jr.]

lol thank you once again! hahaha

[Priscilla Sayers]

:) Big smiles for your sweet Hannah! happy to have the pleasure of enjoying your work!

[Emily Dickinson Jr.]

your reviews make me so happy! :-D

[Priscilla Sayers]

:)