The Creation

The Creation

A Book by Emily Dickinson Jr.
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A sniper visits a preschool one day to entertain and educate the children on both the danger/fun of firearms. © 2012 Emily Dickinson Jr. All rights reserved

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© 2012 Emily Dickinson Jr.


Author's Note

Emily Dickinson Jr.
My first book ever so please be gentle

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Wow!! This is amazing so far. I can relate to Hollie's fascination with guns, I love your characters. Especially Hollie's mother. I cant wait for more! Send me Read Requests if you can!

Posted 10 Years Ago


Sherman P. Bastarache

10 Years Ago

Send me some read request for updates too. I posted one of your stories to twitter, it got read and .. read more
Emily Dickinson Jr.

10 Years Ago

aww thanx so much Sherman! I'm so glad to hear it and dont worry whenever I post something new I al.. read more
Sherman P. Bastarache

10 Years Ago

You are very welcome
This is very creative and quite original. Sure it has a few factual problems, but isn’t that what writing fiction is all about? It might be better to add a reason for Hollies’ mother being alone and agreeing to let her daughter go at this point in the story. You are on the road to being Emily Dickinson Jr.

Posted 10 Years Ago


Emily Dickinson Jr.

10 Years Ago

how do you do that?? this actually my first time writing anything more than a one-off short story
Sherman P. Bastarache

10 Years Ago

Start with what you have, and you have a wonderful outline, then build charactors. You can leave the.. read more
Emily Dickinson Jr.

10 Years Ago

cool! :-)
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sounds interesting, when I find the time, I'll definitely read it!

Posted 11 Years Ago


Emily Dickinson Jr.

11 Years Ago

please do! I look forward to hearing from you!
Sounds good!

Posted 11 Years Ago


Emily Dickinson Jr.

11 Years Ago

lol I think it is :-D
Sounds exciting :) Can't wait to read it

Posted 11 Years Ago


Emily Dickinson Jr.

11 Years Ago

I just finished the first chapter enjoy!

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Added on August 30, 2012
Last Updated on September 29, 2012
Tags: sniper, gun, firearm, Hollie, child, girl, secret, poisonrose

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Emily Dickinson Jr.
Emily Dickinson Jr.

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Im just a highschool girl. Writing is my hobby and I think Im fairly good at it but I leave you to be the judge of that. :-) my best short stories are: http://www.writerscafe.org/writing/poisinros.. more..

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