The Creation

The Creation

A Book by Emily Dickinson Jr.
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A sniper visits a preschool one day to entertain and educate the children on both the danger/fun of firearms. © 2012 Emily Dickinson Jr. All rights reserved

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© 2012 Emily Dickinson Jr.


Author's Note

Emily Dickinson Jr.
My first book ever so please be gentle

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Wow!! This is amazing so far. I can relate to Hollie's fascination with guns, I love your characters. Especially Hollie's mother. I cant wait for more! Send me Read Requests if you can!

Posted 6 Years Ago


Sherman P. Bastarache

6 Years Ago

Send me some read request for updates too. I posted one of your stories to twitter, it got read and .. read more
Emily Dickinson Jr.

6 Years Ago

aww thanx so much Sherman! I'm so glad to hear it and dont worry whenever I post something new I al.. read more
Sherman P. Bastarache

6 Years Ago

You are very welcome
This is very creative and quite original. Sure it has a few factual problems, but isn’t that what writing fiction is all about? It might be better to add a reason for Hollies’ mother being alone and agreeing to let her daughter go at this point in the story. You are on the road to being Emily Dickinson Jr.

Posted 6 Years Ago


Emily Dickinson Jr.

6 Years Ago

how do you do that?? this actually my first time writing anything more than a one-off short story
Sherman P. Bastarache

6 Years Ago

Start with what you have, and you have a wonderful outline, then build charactors. You can leave the.. read more
Emily Dickinson Jr.

6 Years Ago

cool! :-)
sounds interesting, when I find the time, I'll definitely read it!

Posted 7 Years Ago


Emily Dickinson Jr.

7 Years Ago

please do! I look forward to hearing from you!
Sounds good!

Posted 7 Years Ago


Emily Dickinson Jr.

7 Years Ago

lol I think it is :-D
Sounds exciting :) Can't wait to read it

Posted 7 Years Ago


Emily Dickinson Jr.

7 Years Ago

I just finished the first chapter enjoy!

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Added on August 30, 2012
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Tags: sniper, gun, firearm, Hollie, child, girl, secret, poisonrose

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Emily Dickinson Jr.
Emily Dickinson Jr.

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Im just a highschool girl. Writing is my hobby and I think Im fairly good at it but I leave you to be the judge of that. :-) my best short stories are: http://www.writerscafe.org/writing/poisinros.. more..

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