Issac Neuton

Issac Neuton

A Poem by Emily Dickinson Jr.
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A poem about Isaac Neuton

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Newty, Newty

Clonk on conk

Motions made you clumsy

Tick, tock

Distance

Go together

Watch that marble roll

Drop an apple

Drop a feather

One day help

Predict the weather

Newty, Newty

In a book

Students, Students

Look, Look, Look

He made some laws

Because his noggin

Shook

 

© 2012 Emily Dickinson Jr.  All rights reserved

 

© 2012 Emily Dickinson Jr.


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clever, funny + good meter + flow
Is the mis~spelling of Newton deliberate?~ I,m prob missing a joke
Well done + thanks for sharing

Posted 7 Years Ago


Emily Dickinson Jr.

7 Years Ago

I made it a pun off the neuton to make it more serious yet at the same time completely make fun of t.. read more
Haha how clever! Love it!

Posted 7 Years Ago


Emily Dickinson Jr.

7 Years Ago

Im glad you liked it!!
I loved this piece! Brings Newton down to our level. XD Nicely done. The poem flows well, makes it memorable.
Keep up the good work,
C. d'Argent

Posted 7 Years Ago


Emily Dickinson Jr.

7 Years Ago

Thanx so much Shristine Im glad you liked it and Im really glad ull remeber it
I wish they used this in science class, it'd be much more interesting! Great poem!

Posted 7 Years Ago


Emily Dickinson Jr.

7 Years Ago

I showed this to my physics teacher and she just started cracking up
Alexa Tasch

7 Years Ago

I would too if I were her!
Emily Dickinson Jr.

7 Years Ago

:-D lol
Hi Emily this was fun! it made me laugh in the way it caricatured Sir Isaac. Flows well and is a feel good piece.

Posted 7 Years Ago


Emily Dickinson Jr.

7 Years Ago

Thanx!! I was in a silly mood today
lol...this is great!

Posted 7 Years Ago


Emily Dickinson Jr.

7 Years Ago

Thanx so much Im glad you enjoyed it!!!
I agree . Cute poem...

Posted 7 Years Ago


Emily Dickinson Jr.

7 Years Ago

thanx!!
Sami Khalil

7 Years Ago

You are welcome...
Very cute poem

Posted 7 Years Ago


Emily Dickinson Jr.

7 Years Ago

I'm glad you like it :-)
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I like the misspelling of Newton to Neuton. Right away the title sets up its quirkiness. A fun poem. Nice job.

Posted 7 Years Ago


Emily Dickinson Jr.

7 Years Ago

lol im glad you liked it I was a little worried about that part cuz u know how anal some ppl can be .. read more
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LOL :) Ahhhh....Neuty :) Who knew physics could be so fun! Nice work on this, my friend.

Posted 7 Years Ago


Emily Dickinson Jr.

7 Years Ago

lol I was writing poems in physics class and got yelled at but my teacher doesnt care as long as the.. read more

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Added on September 18, 2012
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Tags: laws of motion, science, physics, Issac Neuton

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Emily Dickinson Jr.
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