The wright brothers

a poem about the wright brother....

There were two men of Wright

Responsible for controlling man’s first flight

 

As children they were given

A copter made of bands and ribbon

Held together tight

 

Deconstruct and copying

By, and by the twilight

Filled their dim-lit childhood nights

 

When their mother died

They left school and pursued their lives

 

Ink stained their hands until they planned

And wheels fell in their lap

All to profit the pursue of mighty wing flaps

 

One, two … three’s the charm

For gliding high with much alarm

 

They were the first to break on through

The nevers and unpracticals

They followed through

 

But stayed in the shadows unrecognized

Until to LeMans , France they flew to high

 

And the world accepted these two guys

With wonder gleaming from their eyes

 

Even today, long passed their Demise

We proud people fly on high

 

Reviews

[Whiskurz]

And it still amazes me that man can fly....Good write my friend....Whisk

[Emily Dickinson Jr.]

Thank you

[KeeD]

What a wonderful tribute to one of the greatest inventors and pioneers of aeronautics.
Very intelligent, educational and well written. Not only does it educate but it's poetic and it has good flow.. it tells their story through your words , I honestly loved it.

[Emily Dickinson Jr.]

thanx :-) It was a project for my physics class and I thought theyd be something cool to wright about. I'm really glad you like it I'm turning it in today so hopefully it gets a good grade.

[KeeD]

100/100 Em :) Sure about it! :)

[Emily Dickinson Jr.]

I'll tell u if Ur wright who knows maybe Ur psychic lol

[Chaos_Collector]

You've written about the Wright brothers in a very elegant manner. This is good stuff and the rhythm and rhyming is excellent. However you should fix your punctuation adding full stops when necessary. Aside from that, great work

[Emily Dickinson Jr.]

Lol thanks! Had to do it for school and all. Might change it a bit this is just what came out after I wrote it lol

[Chaos_Collector]

Lol You're welcome. School has encourage greatness to come about. This piece is the greatness

[Emily Dickinson Jr.]

Aww Ur gna make me blush

[Chaos_Collector]

:) Keep that pen writing those awesome poems