My Pumpkin

this may be the worst poem ever but i thought it was cute

My favorite part of Autumn

is watching the leaves

change color

but the leaves have

yet to change

other than the cold weather

your are the only sign i have of Autumn

with your stem bigger than

your circular

orange body

your so tiny

compaired to all the other pumpkins

nobody wanted you but

i had to have you

now as you sit there on my nightstand

i drift off to sleep

while looking at

the tiny and cute orange thing

i call

my pumpkin

Reviews

[Arsenic Nemesis]

B'aw this is so sweet, love pumpkins~~ heee... A lovely little piece here, very cute indeed, keep up the good work~

[Jesse Jacques]

what the heck? uhh...why would you stare at a pumpkin?

[OR]

Nice one
I think this could be about more than just a "pumpkin"
Nice job
Peace!

[Kelly M.]

It's definitely not your worst poem! It's so cute! I love baby pumpkins! In autumn, my friends and I would take a small pumpkin and paint them however we like! You should try it sometime.. it's fun! And don't think it's awful... because it's not!!

[GTVile]

I like it. You had no pretentious notions of abstract artistic dribble; you went for what you were feeling and you nailed it. Good job. =)

[Alexa Tasch]

i already read this lol.and as i said before it is wonderful

[chillz]

aww this was sweet^^ I loved it {{kinda cheers me up a bit}}

[A.A.Romanczuk]

Aaaawww....Julie...this is absolutely darling...yes, embrace the little, unwanted things...find the beauty within them...wonderful

[An owl on the moon]

I loved the sweet feel of this write. The sense that the season is changing, and here is your present reward of that time. Pumpkins are so festive and fun!