Drinking Problem

Drinking Problem

A Poem by Shannon
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A song written about a character of mine who tends to heal himself temporarily by drinking. It's short I know :P

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It always burns worse on its way up
Never ending spinning headaches
Self pity in a twelve ounce bottle
Hoping your tolerance is heavy
With sickness in your intestines core

© 2011 Shannon


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Short, simple and right to the point. You've described a drinking problem quite well and it reminds me of the last time I had a little too much to drink, and helps me consider never drinking again.

Posted 12 Years Ago


Hah! I love that first line. I've only done that once from drinking. Boy, that night was something else..

Posted 12 Years Ago



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Shannon
Shannon

Moriches, NY



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I left WC for a while but decided to come back since there are some people on here who I actually enjoy. I write poetry usually based off my dreams, stories or situations in my daily life. I write .. more..

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