Stop The Fall

Stop The Fall

A Poem by ~BlueSkyy~

Something caught my eye the other day

Something I never noticed about you

 

You would do anything to stay my friend

 

While sitting here all alone in the rain

I thought about what you said

 

It's hard to fake a smile

When you look into my eyes

 

Finally the truth comes out

I am falling just for you

 

Can't someone come here

Stop me from falling

 

My torn up heart is begining to be whole

It's patching up, as I fall for you

 

Even the stitches

Can't withstand how my heart feels for you

 

I stay out in the rain

Deep into thought about you

 

My torn up heart is slowly healing

I just wish, someone could stop me

 

From falling, falling

Into a long time period of falling down

 

I'm falling, falling, falling for you

 

Sadly it could never be

So alone in the rain, I'll stay.

 

© 2010 ~BlueSkyy~


Author's Note

~BlueSkyy~
Written to be sort of a gothic-like romance. Tell me what you think in your review. :]

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It's very interesting, I think it's lovely. It creates a vivid mental picture of a girl sitting on a wall in the rain just thinking about this guy and how she is reluctant to fall for him for fear of being hurt...again. It's a wonderful story told in a flowing poem. Great write!

Posted 10 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.




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It's very interesting, I think it's lovely. It creates a vivid mental picture of a girl sitting on a wall in the rain just thinking about this guy and how she is reluctant to fall for him for fear of being hurt...again. It's a wonderful story told in a flowing poem. Great write!

Posted 10 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

This is a very emotional peice of art (I say art, because I think art has anything to do with creativity). Anyways, love the vocab, and the the way you put everything together was spectacular :3 I love it. Please continue to grace this world with your amazing ability to write :)

Posted 10 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Intriguing write. You captured the speaker, gave me a vision of how they really. Good job.

Posted 10 Years Ago


Outstanding job on this.

Keep up the good work

Posted 10 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

A little glimpse into a soul soaked with the confusion and onset of feelings for someone special. I wonder why it can never be... maybe it's just my opinion, but I think if things are supposed to be... then they will work out just that way. When love is the involved.. you just never know how it will work out, but it will. Love is love.

Posted 10 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.


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~BlueSkyy~
~BlueSkyy~

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