You've Heard of Eyes That Kill...

You've Heard of Eyes That Kill...

A Poem by joliecouer

 

You’ve Heard of Eyes That Kill…
No, they don’t seem
supple enough.
They need to be
soft yet bossy,
curved but
honey-don’t-you-mess-with-me
sharp.
 
Oh yes.
 
They’ve got to be
that perfect shade of
velvet heather
and
juicy pomegranate.
That’s it,
one more coat
and a little gloss
just there.
They've gotta catch
his eye make him look twice,
make him wonder about things.
Dangerous Things.
 

© 2008 joliecouer


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I love this poem - purely because it perfectly encapsulates the constant questioning and doubt you feel about yourself just as your about to speak to someone you like. Not gonna lie - pretty brilliant Prachi.

Posted 10 Years Ago


I adore this!
Its so seductive, I love it. aha.
It seems like your creating the perfect stare to linger in a man you have interests in. Its amazing.

Keep writing, your really talented!

(:

Posted 10 Years Ago


so totally prachi

and i got it, i really did :D

Posted 10 Years Ago



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