You've Heard of Eyes That Kill...

You've Heard of Eyes That Kill...

A Poem by joliecouer


You’ve Heard of Eyes That Kill…
No, they don’t seem
supple enough.
They need to be
soft yet bossy,
curved but
Oh yes.
They’ve got to be
that perfect shade of
velvet heather
juicy pomegranate.
That’s it,
one more coat
and a little gloss
just there.
They've gotta catch
his eye make him look twice,
make him wonder about things.
Dangerous Things.

© 2008 joliecouer

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I love this poem - purely because it perfectly encapsulates the constant questioning and doubt you feel about yourself just as your about to speak to someone you like. Not gonna lie - pretty brilliant Prachi.

Posted 13 Years Ago

I adore this!
Its so seductive, I love it. aha.
It seems like your creating the perfect stare to linger in a man you have interests in. Its amazing.

Keep writing, your really talented!


Posted 13 Years Ago

so totally prachi

and i got it, i really did :D

Posted 13 Years Ago

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Added on July 29, 2008
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