The Bounds

The Bounds

A Poem by Pradeep Nair
"

One can never chain the mind..

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Mind always explore out the bounds of body

Violates the rights and wrongs carved already

 

Cheats the reach of vision and senses of skin.

For it, there doesn't have the limits that akin

 

Oscillates between lust and lure.

Watching the lies embedded as pure.

 

The bounds shouts the mind, not to cross it

From corner of heart lets him cross it.

 

The bounds never crossed the bounds by self

And thus understands the pain of mind.

 

I never knew who draws the lines of life

Limits and infinities those are directly strife.

© 2012 Pradeep Nair


Author's Note

Pradeep Nair
Thanks for the support, in advance..

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A very thinking write-up and the concept of the mind being boundless is interesting. Just one thing as you might be aware...you did not keep the rhyme in the fifth stanza. I point his out as the rest of the poem rhymes very well. But great! Regards, DN

Posted 10 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Pradeep Nair

10 Years Ago

ya...really i missed it. and to be frank, i am not at rhymes. thanks a lot...



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A very thinking write-up and the concept of the mind being boundless is interesting. Just one thing as you might be aware...you did not keep the rhyme in the fifth stanza. I point his out as the rest of the poem rhymes very well. But great! Regards, DN

Posted 10 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Pradeep Nair

10 Years Ago

ya...really i missed it. and to be frank, i am not at rhymes. thanks a lot...
Oscillates between lust and lure,
Watching the lies embedded as pure.
A powerful write.

Posted 10 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Pradeep Nair

10 Years Ago

Thanks a lot
Sami Khalil

10 Years Ago

You are welcome.

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Pradeep Nair
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KERALA, India



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