peace at its best

peace at its best

A Poem by prashant harsh
"

it is time when i found purest form of love,its not love at first sight,but its pure feelings.I already got this printed it in my college annual magzine.

"

You are like pure breeze in midnights of December...,

You are like pure deep blue water of ocean...,

You are like village utopia far from town,

You are like long walk on beach alone,

You are like my precious silence in temple...

 

Yes it’s all true,

You are the only peace, serenity that I was looking for from long ago,

But still its true that you are only air that can be felt but can never touched,

You are only the water of ocean that can be admired but can never be drunk,

You are only utopia far from reality

You are only my god that can only be praised but can never be seen.

© 2013 prashant harsh


Author's Note

prashant harsh
please give me true feedback so that i can know how efficient I'm.its also my first attempt at poetry.

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quite nice, u mst ve a try to write about serenity of jodhpur,

Posted 11 Years Ago


Good Flow and Better Piece of Writing Mate :)
Enjoyed it :)

- Singh :)

Posted 11 Years Ago


prashant harsh

11 Years Ago

thanx foh review :)
first attempt at poetry? you're a natural! :) great work!

Posted 11 Years Ago


prashant harsh

11 Years Ago

yeap it is my first attempt thnx foh ur comment :)
Ah Utopia, Shangrila, Edeb and the likes, it's a beatiful dream, your poetry takes me places, intriguing thoughts and beautifully written, like this one.

Posted 11 Years Ago


prashant harsh

11 Years Ago

thnx
Beautiful! very good and I love the poem.

Posted 11 Years Ago


prashant harsh

11 Years Ago

thnx its so nice of you
Another Poet

11 Years Ago

your welcome!
I enjoy the unique images that you use; they're rather intriguing! my one comment would be not to reuse imagery. the image of a utopia is a wonderful one that you pull off well. there is no need to repeat it again in the second stanza. Great work!

Posted 11 Years Ago


prashant harsh

11 Years Ago

thanx foh comment
nice write up. i really liked it. :)

Posted 11 Years Ago


prashant harsh

11 Years Ago

thanx :)
Lovely words...and keep writing and thanks for the read request:)

Posted 11 Years Ago


prashant harsh

11 Years Ago

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Added on May 27, 2013
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prashant harsh
prashant harsh

jodhpur, India



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hello everyone who is reading dis,yes its my first attempt to showcase my writing hope u'll like it n give true feedback.I'm sophomore(2nd year) engineering student. ?ref=tn_tnmn more..

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