BROTHER , LOVE YOU

This is a poem specially for my brothers..........

You have loved me as much as one can,

you have always been there for me

when there was no one;

We have fought, we have quarreled,

but let me say, with you

I always had fun.

You shared your secrets with me,

and never betrayed mine;

You have given me so much,

with me you have spent so much of your time.

These lines aren't lifted from anywhere,

they are straight from my heart;

Even if I am given anyone else,

Never with you will I part;

Why ? It's simple :

Where will I find another brother so cool and smart ?

Author's Note

Well this is for both my brothers !!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!

Reviews

[MissWordSmith]

a very good write. I wrote a poem My Brother. little less appreciative them you are, but at the end of the day.. our siblings are the closest things we will ever have. :)

This is wonderful. It reminded me of my own brother, who can be a bit strange at times but still, he's my brother. You captured the relationship brilliantly. Good job.

[Vincent Esprit FMI]

Prateeksha it is not often we see pieces like that from a sister to a brother. Where else to enter the world but through family, great write!

[Mauricio Montoya]

This is a beautiful piece; I can feel the warmth flow through this writing. Great work

[Luna Northstar]

Awwwww, so sweet!!!

[Haifa]

oh I loved it, and I am sure your brother will love it. I have same feeling to my brother too, maybe I would write a poem for him as well. Well done, I enjoy reading your poem.
Haifa

[Rachel Pickhardt]

Very cute. It emanates children very well, but in a "looking back" sort of way. I enjoyed this because my brother an I are close too.