OH SPRING FEVER !

OH SPRING FEVER !

A Poem by Prateeksha Khot
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This one is for the Spring Fever Senryu contest....... However please note that basically it is a Haiku as it is related to nature

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Restless the Heart is ,

Mind, Twitchy and Jumpy too;

Tell, Spring ! What to do !

© 2010 Prateeksha Khot


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Author's Note

Prateeksha Khot
My first Haiku. So don't know how is it.


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Hey, Really liked this. It's been so nice out the last couple days where, and this just hit home. I like the space between Spring and the ! and do and the !, I hope that was intentional. It elongates that feeling of joy a bit, heightens the excitement.

Keep it up, and have a good spring!

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SPRING! Welcome with this lovely senryu

Posted 10 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

beautiful senryu

Posted 10 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

never wrote a senryu. loved yours

Posted 10 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

nice. liked it

Posted 10 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

I truly enjoyed the read. Little words which are largely descriptive. So, what do you do until Spring you ask? Why, you keep on writing! ;)

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This is great, I loved it. To me it says we are restless being
cooped up all winter, and Spring can't get here fast
enough. This was really cute, keep up the good work:).

Posted 10 Years Ago


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nice

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I know how it is. You convey a feverish excitement contagiously. It doesn't even need the pics.

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Tags: spring, fever, mind, hear, twitchy, restless, jumpy, do

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Prateeksha Khot
Prateeksha Khot

Mumbai, Maharashtra, India



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