The TIE BREAKER..

The TIE BREAKER..

A Poem by aviiar:))
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( it´s the continuation of my last poem ¨THE TIE..)

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One day, in the coldness of January
a problem came which I really can´t carry.
But I think it´s the answer to my prayer
God gave me the TIE BREAKER.

No. 1 is not anymore mine,
cause he started stepping out of my line.
I don´t want him to leave
But freedom is the only thing I can give.

My heart is beating faster,
when I saw him being happier,
happier when she´s there,
giving her his love and care.

I cried when he told me ¨it´s her¨
I thought my heart started to tear
I know it´s hard without him
but NO! because No. 2 came.

No. 2 became my strength
He too became a really good friend
and one big thing he made me realized,
in solving problems it does n´t involve cries.

Slowly I´ll forget No.1,
He´ll be gone in no time
for I know it´s a mistake,
a mistake I can´t anymore take.

Giving them a tie,
is just the biggest lie,
cause No. 2 is better!
And  I believe he´ll always be greater!

© 2011 aviiar:))


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aviiar:))
please post your comments! thanks.. :))

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thank you!

Posted 13 Years Ago


i like how its no.2 who's better, not no.1...idk why :) thanks for sharing!
nice to see you got that sorted out eh? :) great work,keep writing!

Posted 13 Years Ago


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aviiar:))
aviiar:))

bicol, Philippines



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i just want to write..but not all the time..i have a special mood that is not in me always that whenever it strike me, i start to get some papers and pen and write it down.i love writing poems,specia.. more..

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