-A TRIAL-

-A TRIAL-

 

Sorry for the words I can´t say,

Sorry for I can´t always stay.

But I promise I’ll always care,

And even from afar, I would stare..

 

Though our world seems to be apart,

in my heart, you´ll never depart.

though sometimes, to each other, we´re far,

our hearts will always be on guard.

 

I´ll always treasure you,

cause you´re too precious, it´s true…

and to tell you, you´re charming,

whenever you write poems with singing…

 

Even I can´t be by your side,

remember my love will always abide,

and even if today I can´t be completely yours,

can I be more than just an ordinary friend of yours?

 

Forgive me if sometimes I break you heart..

just remember, I’ll never be apart,

I want you to know that you´re special,

even we´re too young and

we know that this is just A TRIAL.. :))

Reviews

[Zeo Writer]

Great poem!

[Alvin L. Kathembe]

cute!made me smile :)
Even I can´t be by your side,

remember my love will always abide,

and even if today I can´t be completely yours,

can I be more than just an ordinary friend of yours?

[Daytonight]

Very well done. Keep on penning.

[Fate]

hmn..i like it.!its cute.nice!

[rae52]

really really good

[aviiar:))]

yes..but not with the person from this poem..:)he´s actually from my past.
i´m apparently in love with the person from YO CONFIO EN TI..:))haha

Thanks PRODICAL.it´s so nice having and knowing u.
MAS PODER PARA TODOS!! :))

P.S.
-call me ABBY.aviiar is just a pen name..haha.and i´m used to hear it from only one person..:))thanks.

[prodicallife]

Aviiar
You must be in love with someone..:P:P
it`s not that easy to compose such a jwell without these beautifull feelings

You are simply awesom

Keep up the good work

Regards
PRODICAL

[aviiar:))]

tnx Thrinna.u´re inspiring me a lot.:))

[Thea]

Yes...Things happen for a reason...Nice poem... :)

[The Analog Kid]

This has a youthful feel and some decent rhyming:)