Forgiveness

just a little something I came up with for those people who experience a bump in a relationship or any situation...

In life you may do things that
you never wished you done
In life there are obstacles that
you must overcome
In life you make mistakes and
learn for the better, and in life
GOD points you to the path you
must enter....
In life you meet that person that's
suppose to be in it
In life you may hurt someone
that you never intended
In life you try hard to make all bad   
things good, and in life one of those
bad things may come off as misunderstood 
In life you say "I'm sorry" if you
did something wrong
In life you should forgive so the
damage won't prolong
In life that one you meet may
make you feel whole
And That One That Your Talking
About May Be Reading This Poem.......                          

Reviews

[Coyote Poetry]

Great wisdom in your poetry. Life is fair. If we lead with love and kindness. Tried to do the right things. We will be okay.
"In life you should forgive so the
damage won't prolong "
I agree with the above lines. If we don't forgive. We will limit what we can do and see. No weakness in the excellent poetry.
Coyote

[Jeannear]

very true coyote thank you for that kind comment

[Linda alexander]

In life you should forgive so the
damage won't prolong
Well said, very true to the core, great writing

[Jeannear]

Exactly!....we all make mistakes in life and if it was a true mistake you learn from it

[Linda alexander]

Take care, keep writing

[Veronica DiMarco]

Makes me ponder on those people I've wronged and who have wronged me..

[closed]

I like this a lot, and its true we must forgive. Its really good.

[Jeannear]

thank you and yes we do :)

[closed]

Do you think you can check out mine?

[Jeannear]

I cant your profile says closed

[tyson]

so much heart in this, there's no choice BUT to love it. The phrasing is beautiful, it just rolls right off of the tongue. Really enjoying your stuff!

[Jeannear]

thank you Tyson I appreciate that:)

[Calissa Knox]

I absolutely love this poem; it is such a moving piece of writing. The ending is very clever. Your poetry is prolific and inspiring.

[Jeannear]

thank you so much I love this comment I appreciate it very much...:)

[Calissa Knox]

You're welcome, Jeannear! :)

[Angel-fish]

On line 11 you say "heart". Did you mean "heart" or "hurt"? It's a beautiful piece, besides that confusion, and I'm eager to read some of your other works.

[Jeannear]

thank you for noticing that error I didn't see it at first...I appreciate your comment

[Sarah Lynn]

I love this ! Absolutely brilliant!

[Jeannear]

thank you :)

[Jared Michael Smith]

I enjoyed this very much. :) Your repetition was charming, as was your rhyme scheme. My only suggestions is to possibly look at working on your structure. Anyways, thank you so much for sharing this! :)

[Jeannear]

thank you very much and I appreciate your comment and criticism and will work on that...:)

[Jared Michael Smith]

You're very welcome. :)