Summer

Summer

A Poem by Jeannear
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just a little simple feel good poem..:)

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The sun comes up The sky is clear The birds are chirping

and full of cheer

The air is calm  The trees are full The scent of summer

is well in tune

The flowers are blooming The grass is green The slight blow

of wind feels the scene

A beautiful day and soon calm night The moon is up and

the next day is in sight......

© 2013 Jeannear


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You can see the summer is live through the poem, spring is my favorite season, great write

Posted 10 Years Ago


nice imagery for summer :)

Posted 10 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Jeannear

10 Years Ago

thanks.....
I love this poem, it is wonderful. I was just wondering if I could make a suggestion?

Posted 10 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Jeannear

10 Years Ago

thank you and yes you may :)
Anna Blackburn

10 Years Ago

I like how each line has that rhyme to it, but the second line does not and it might flow better if .. read more
What beautiful memories of summer you have left for us on your page, Jeannear. How I wish summer was upon us rather that just over!

Posted 10 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Jeannear

10 Years Ago

thank you joyce and I wish the summer was still here to....it will be here again before we know it :.. read more
Reading this I could almost feel the warmth of the sun and the cool breeze of summertime. Your descriptions are vivid and agreeable. Well done.

Posted 10 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Jeannear

10 Years Ago

that comment made me smile thank you I appreciate it...:)))
Nothing better than a warm Summer day. The good description made me wish for a warm day. Winter days are here. The cold is here for awhile. Thank you for sharing the excellent poetry.
Coyote

Posted 10 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Jeannear

10 Years Ago

thank you so much that comment means a lot to me..:))
Ah, you capture summer upon a warm zephyr that makes me want to crawl back into her arms before winter arrives.

Posted 10 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Jeannear

10 Years Ago

me to lol thank you

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