Burning spirit...

The arrows of life which come and pass by, came as a spirit of burning eye..

Living the dream and happiness which scream, is what matters along the lane..

Are all thy desires still alive which were suppressed inside with time..

But the burning heart and its lonely cry come and kiss in dark sighs..

Think and think of what u like and u shall own it in a speck of a time…

I owe u nothing, I owe u nothing, I only owe ma self a life..

A life I desired, a life I deserved. To breath free, to live it all in glee..

Bliss of love and bliss of smiles shall be by thy door every time..

Keeping the memories be it good o bad, regret shall never retain insight..

The stars of light, the deep blue skies shall laugh along with you as u smile..

The brightness of the day and the sun shining along dismay..

Keeping the sweetness alive, making it the best moment at sight..

You breath the freshness around and dream to it live out loud..

Enjoy the softness of cream, take a bite of chocolate and sleep..

Do things as much as u please, do it all to live the moment indeed..

Reviews

[Dayran]

When the river flows into the ocean do we say the river has become the ocean. In the realm of the dream, the way it relates to the way of the living there are many differences in perception. Even as we moan the loss of the dream in our movement we are already speaking the language of the chocolate consumers.

It says one thing to me. Enjoy the chocolate. It is also a part of the dream.

[alegria]

thanku for d lovely review..:)

[Sheila Kline]

Oh yes, may we live, and enjoy it as we do, and love, and love, and LOVE!! I especially enjoy your last verse - I could use some of that chocolate!!!....lol
A nice write with sage advice for us to remember to live and love and enjoy it all!

[alegria]

thanku for d lovely review:)

[Nath]

This was so overall great that I can't pick a line I liked in particular. I couldn't agree any more with this poem either.
We are alive to live. It's not forever, and the best we can do is to make each and every moment memorable and worthwhile, living it to the fullest, never bother wasting time regretting past mistakes but to look ahead and enjoy the now while it lasts.
Brilliant poem!

[alegria]

thanku for d lovely review..:)

[Nath]

My pleasure!