'A Voyage of Victory..'

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"I surrendered with all my egos..

And you walked away with all reasons..
Last night has dented my heart..
For this shall not change..
All shattered and tattered me..

Possibly, I deserve better than this..
A myth that held me with all mist..
Reward of a higher cadre..
I give up all the promises..

Here begins a new Saga..
For I shall take care of self..
Rise above the ruthless help..

A Voyage of Victory..

A Journey of Joy..

A Passage of Passion..

A Road of Radiance..!!!"

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Reviews

[TPK Stories]

Sounds like a journey with the self going through the many ups and downs of life...well written....

[Priyankaabhilaashi]

Thanks Starrleena Magyck!!

[Nayan]

You have nicely expressed the struggles that go within every soul, the one that Paulo Coelho says as 'Good Fight'. And that after every low must come a higher glee, that after every darkness must come the golden sun... this hope is the basis of us taking the faith's leap!

The ending stanza reminded me of one poem of mine. And I love such use of phrases!
http://www.writerscafe.org/writing/bjgindia/509831/

[Priyankaabhilaashi]

Thank you Mr. Dayran..!!

[DIVYA]

"A Voyage of Victory..
A Journey of Joy..

A Passage of Passion..

A Road of Radiance..!!!""


Truly life is more than a heartbreak...Life is all of the above and more.

Keep writing and smiling. :)

[Priyankaabhilaashi]

Thanks Ms. Divya.. :-)

[Thomas Fitzgerald]

A highly descriptive and telling piece that transforms the reader and rests them down, well done, good read.

[Priyankaabhilaashi]

Thanks Thomas Fitzgerald..!!!

[stars are far]

that was well done ... great poem

[Priyankaabhilaashi]

Thank you stars are far..!!!

[stars are far]

You are welcome

[Coyote Poetry]

A amazing poem. I like the way you led the reader to the positive ending. Sometime bad endings allow new and better beginnings. Thank you for sharing the excellent poetry.
Coyote

[Priyankaabhilaashi]

Thanks Mr. Coyote..!!!

[Dayran]

A new saga indeed Priya ... well expressed.

[Priyankaabhilaashi]

Thanks Dayran..!!!