'A Voyage of Victory..'

'A Voyage of Victory..'

A Poem by Priyankaabhilaashi

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"I surrendered with all my egos..
And you walked away with all reasons..
Last night has dented my heart..
For this shall not change..
All shattered and tattered me..

Possibly, I deserve better than this..
A myth that held me with all mist..
Reward of a higher cadre..
I give up all the promises..

Here begins a new Saga..
For I shall take care of self..
Rise above the ruthless help..

A Voyage of Victory..
A Journey of Joy..
A Passage of Passion..
A Road of Radiance..!!!"

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© 2013 Priyankaabhilaashi


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Sounds like a journey with the self going through the many ups and downs of life...well written....

Posted 6 Years Ago


Priyankaabhilaashi

5 Years Ago

Thanks Starrleena Magyck!!
You have nicely expressed the struggles that go within every soul, the one that Paulo Coelho says as 'Good Fight'. And that after every low must come a higher glee, that after every darkness must come the golden sun... this hope is the basis of us taking the faith's leap!

The ending stanza reminded me of one poem of mine. And I love such use of phrases!
http://www.writerscafe.org/writing/bjgindia/509831/

Posted 6 Years Ago


Priyankaabhilaashi

6 Years Ago

Thank you Mr. Dayran..!!
"A Voyage of Victory..
A Journey of Joy..

A Passage of Passion..

A Road of Radiance..!!!""


Truly life is more than a heartbreak...Life is all of the above and more.

Keep writing and smiling. :)

Posted 6 Years Ago


Priyankaabhilaashi

6 Years Ago

Thanks Ms. Divya.. :-)
A highly descriptive and telling piece that transforms the reader and rests them down, well done, good read.

Posted 6 Years Ago


Priyankaabhilaashi

6 Years Ago

Thanks Thomas Fitzgerald..!!!
that was well done ... great poem

Posted 6 Years Ago


Priyankaabhilaashi

6 Years Ago

Thank you stars are far..!!!
stars are far

6 Years Ago

You are welcome
A amazing poem. I like the way you led the reader to the positive ending. Sometime bad endings allow new and better beginnings. Thank you for sharing the excellent poetry.
Coyote

Posted 6 Years Ago


Priyankaabhilaashi

6 Years Ago

Thanks Mr. Coyote..!!!
A new saga indeed Priya ... well expressed.

Posted 6 Years Ago


Priyankaabhilaashi

6 Years Ago

Thanks Dayran..!!!

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Priyankaabhilaashi

Jaipur, India



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A traveller by choice..A writer by soul..!!!! A freelance writer..A Doctorate..A Management Graduate..!!!!! Born and brought up in Jaipur, The Pink City. You may read me here also: http://enri.. more..

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