'Engrave a story..'

'Engrave a story..'

A Story by Priyankaabhilaashi

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"To engrave a story on the Dashboard of the Car was the easiest approach for the much wanted attention, Rex was looking from Rosy, he went four steps ahead by pasting a wooden-carved name sheet - 'Destiny's Heaven' adjacent to the speedometer, sprinkling silver glitters on the steering, a string over the gear-box & a bundle of love-dipped notes inside the tissue-paper box..!!
Even before Rosy could have a feel of the beautiful aroma, a truck overloaded with iron rods gushed into the car and tossed it off..  The car cascaded, took few somersaults and bumped into a valley nearby..
Thanks Goodness! Rosy survived..!! 
What if the materialistic stuff went off.. the true emotions stay back if they are truly true..!! Rex rushed to save Rosy from all possible disaster, The Almighty was kind enough..!!
Profound thoughts find their way through.. Words go silent when emotions speak..!!!"
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© 2014 Priyankaabhilaashi


Author's Note

Priyankaabhilaashi
Momentary thoughts weaved in 10 minutes!!

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Great opening sentence. It's "passing" not "pasting". This paragraph beginning: "What if the materialistic stuff went off..." is a bit confusing, I think I know where you are going with it, but it's not as illustrated as the other paragraphs. Nice assemblage for 10 minutes.

Posted 6 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Priyankaabhilaashi

6 Years Ago

Thanks so much Roarke Sir! M trying my hands on stories these days.. Will keep things in mind..



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High emotional story. You say right...

Profound thoughts find their way through..
Words go silent when emotions speak..!!!"

When and what can eyes say words can not. Aap ka kissagoe kamal ka hai. Send me more stories. I'll interstly wait.

Posted 6 Years Ago


Priyankaabhilaashi

6 Years Ago

Thanks Mr. Ssadd..!!
A person selling fruits in a barrel ... may finally realize they have sold it all ... and there is no more to sell. Still ... if the person could change the empty barrel into a drum ... they would have a new vocation. Nice.

Posted 6 Years Ago


Priyankaabhilaashi

6 Years Ago

Thanks Dayran.!!
Great opening sentence. It's "passing" not "pasting". This paragraph beginning: "What if the materialistic stuff went off..." is a bit confusing, I think I know where you are going with it, but it's not as illustrated as the other paragraphs. Nice assemblage for 10 minutes.

Posted 6 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Priyankaabhilaashi

6 Years Ago

Thanks so much Roarke Sir! M trying my hands on stories these days.. Will keep things in mind..

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Added on February 23, 2014
Last Updated on February 23, 2014
Tags: Destiny, Story, Emotions, Words

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Priyankaabhilaashi
Priyankaabhilaashi

Jaipur, India



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A traveller by choice..A writer by soul..!!!! A freelance writer..A Doctorate..A Management Graduate..!!!!! Born and brought up in Jaipur, The Pink City. You may read me here also: http://enri.. more..

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